sirith_knight

I'm an athiest, nothing wrong with it. Just the way people look at life. Everyone questions life.. There are thousands of religions out there and not all of them can be right, I bet none of them are. I don't like to think about such things, drives me crazy because there is no way to ever know what is right.

Lol, are you being sarcastic or not? If you aren't maybe you should check out one of my stories ><. There are much more lengthy stories than this, some people just don't post if thaey can't really find enough content to post about that could really be considered constructive criticism.

Usually I don't like stories like this, but that one actually made me Lol. BTW, don't be discouraged if no one posts on ur thread in the 2 minutes you decided to wait, also, everytime you look at ur own thread it adds to the times viewded... so yea...

I don't know why but reading that I kept thinking back to the book 1984. In case you never read it the book was supposedly what the fuure could be in a totalitarian government system (was written in the 1940s..so future then, lol) Everyone is being watched all the time and if they step out of line they vanish, all data of their existence is gone... The main character tried to find a way to get around the gorvernment and be happy but never really had a chance, they knew the whole time. He worked for the government, and they were demanded to forget anthing they say but some of them could not oblidge and they would be killed... seems rather similar to me, meh.... Maybe it could have the same principle with a different story line. Maybe even a RS version. Like a man who lives in Varrock and is tired of the rules there, but no one will help him... I dunno, just throwing it out there. In 1984 the main character kept a journal of what he did so people might be able to find it if he died, maybe this could be the book the man wrote as he attempted to fight back.

Real sry bout that guys, I was lookin through both forums and I kinda forgot which one I was in...yea...

This is the beginning to a short story I wrote in my free time, and to be honest I am pretty sure I will never finish it... Feel free to hijack my story, lol. All the stuff in here is based off World of Warcraft... Stratholme is one of the highest level 5 man dungeons in the game, the people in the story are all my friends from in game. I may add to it later, and if I do I will update... ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¦Ã¢â¬ÅBeyond these gates lay the ravaged city of Stratholme. Undead have plagued and destroyed everything that could even be called civilization, it is a barren wasteland of death. Resting in the slaughter house, guarded by three necropolotic spirit towers is the Baron Riverdare, he must be destroyed. ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¦Ã¢â¬ÅI have found the key, the key that opens these gates. It was hidden away by the only escaping citizen of this town, a key to the city of the damned. I have called you all here to help me on my quest to kill the dreaded Baron. His defeat will bring you great honor and riches. I cannot do this alone, I only ask that you assist me, if you wish to leave, do so now and I will find others who will. I chose you because it is you I trust by my side in combat more than any other.ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬ÃâÃ

I couldn't stop my mind from snapping to the song "When I close my Eyes" by Kenny Chesney. Not to bad at all, I kinda hummed it to the rythmn of the song and it almost words already... the two sound very similar if you have heard the song. Very well written all together :wink:

I dunno Issy, I think that is kinda the feel of the story. It is kinda of an abstract love story over many years. Tho it does start a bit specific it pans out further and further. I kinda liked the way it was, you never really know anything too much, but the story is short, it is fiction, kinda lets your mind wonder for longer than you read the story, meh, I don't know. Each story has its own style.

YukkyDins, I really wish you would stop posting here. I see about 15 comments that all say "Boring, I didn't read more than the first 3 words, it sucked." Do not comment on someones story unless you read it, and don't tell everyone their stories are boring when their quality is far higher than that of your own "stories" Anyway... I thought it was pretty good. Seemed to have a poetic feel to it. A bit hard to read cause there was no paragraphs. Maybe each sentence should have its own line... i dunno. I did like the style of the story and would read something else written the same way, as long as you promise me to use paragraphs :twisted:

It's going to be continued. That was a mere beginning. As for the description, if there's too much, it gets so boring that you go back to read another one. AHA! But thanks for the comment anyway. Put too little description and people will say "wow, they put no effort into this at all, I am not interested." Description = good... just don't overdo it...

Had some free time so I decided to do this High Fantasy: Eyes of a Warrior Blood Warrior Ravens' Cabal Low Fantasy: A World Behing the Painting Assassin Redemption Comedy: The Imp and Jinn The Chronicles of Da Cabbatron Catherby, teh best city in Runescape And the kings of rs comedy, Gaal and Smoke! The Gaalsien and Smokeeagle Saga Gaal and Smoke 2: Tale of Two Cities Pandora's Requiem Sci-Fi: The Dreamweb Hunter Versus Hunter Paradox Other: Harry (A true story) Unforgiven Since Mein Kampf Dream

Actually I like this better than your other stuff. Actually has some kind of plot along with the comedy of it. You kind of switch from serious to comical rather abrubt and sometimes it creeps me out I have to admit, lol. The actual attack could have been drawn out to make it more action packed and such let's see where you take it though.

Sorry about the wait. I didn't really know where to go with the story, lol. I have to keep in mind the main plot, I tweaked the prologue to make terms with that. Not a huge change, but it works out with what I plan to do better than the old one did, by far. I think I finally figured out where to go with the story and characters... at least until the competition is over... then I will need to brainstorm again. CHAPTER 6: Decisions My stomach felt as if it had caught fire, I thought I was going to die. I close my eyes tightly and prepared for the deathblow, but moments later the pain had subsided. I opened my eyes and looked at Nerzugal. ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¦Ã¢â¬ÅOur final challenger has made it to the third round.ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬ÃâÃ

Wow, pretty much everything you have on here is what I would put on my own list. A lot of very good reads there. If you are new to the library be sure to check out there stories for some inspiration or if you are ever just looking for a good story.

Soul stones, what!? World of Warcraft fan perhaps o.O lol. It was pretty good but seemed a little bit rushed. (In case you didn't know in World of Warcraft warlocks use soulstones to kill people and summon things... etc..)

This is actually very well written for someone who has one post. Is this actually going to be set up like a play? (Having pretty much the entire story set by text rather than decriptions). Seems like it would be very interesting to get that kind of story going in the library.

Ok, there is no "fantasy" section to the library, most of it is fantasy anyway . . . This would be in the "No point/Plot" section. I don't mean to flame but I think most people would rather read a story that did in fact have a plot in it. Adult books aren't dictionaries, they are stories that have a plot, that make sense. I don't know how this story could be divided into "chapters" cause every other sentece started a new topic.

I didn't find it that tough to read, but I hate when people use their actual RS names in the story. Putting numbers in someone's name sounds really stupid in a story... unless it's like you actually telling a story about what you and so and so really did in the wilderness that one time... And sometimes the names got repetitive... I know there is ways to get around that repetitiveness if you just try.

Just got around to proofreading it, I usually miss something anyway, but meh. Lol, at that interview the guy handed my the job and asked me if I could start tomorrow, then he looks down [roosters] his head and goes :? "You're only 16?" I'm like, "erm, I'm only 15" and he goes :o You can't work here unless you are 16, sorry, probably should have checked that before we called you in for an interview, come see us in a few months and we will give you a job. I was like wtf.... anyway, lol. Stupid Bob Evans...

Lol, I can just see Indiana Jones swinging over [bleep]e traps with his whip, lol, now that I think about having done that quest it is quite a bit like an Indiana Jones movie as far as all the dangerous traps you encounter, lol, should be interesting to see what you do with this concept.

Lol, pretty interesting concept for a story. Haven't played RS in a while, are there really giant worms now or is that your own thing? Seems like one of those stories where bad leads to worse, and worse leads to worst, but in the end it all turns out okay, lol. I did notice that most of the time when someone new speaks you skip down to a new line, it should be all the time however. Not that big of a deal, but it makes it easier to keep up with who is speaking.

Wanted to get this posted before I went to bed, I got a job interview at 10:30AM and it is 2:40 AM here, lol. I didn't expect to get this done so fast but once I started writing this part I wanted to get it done. I didn't know I was going to finish where I did, but then I looked back and decided this would be a pretty nice suspenseful part and it was long enough for my tastes. I haven't proof read it cause I didn't have the time, so there is mistakes, hopefully I can edit out the mistakes tomorrow and I will edit the post. Enjoy. Hopefully I will keep up this pace :D CHAPTER 5: Deadly Elimination I opened my eyes slowly, a pain shot through my stomach and I cringed. April woke up; she was lying right next to me. ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¦Ã¢â¬ÅAre you all right?ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬ÃâÃ

I know it's been forver, and it's not even that long, but I am now one of the thousands of helpless victims addicted to World of Warcraft... ah well. CHAPTER 4: The Battles Continue The day rolled on by like normal. Kronas, James, April and I randomly chatting about things, those of us who were fighting tomorrow just trying to keep our mind off the battle for as long as we could, but I couldnÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t. I had never heard of a druid named Korvoc, but I did know how rare and powerful a druid was. It took more years than I was in age just to become initiated. They are supposed to be one of the most versatile classes in all of the lands. They use the power of nature to heal themselves and to take an advantage over their opponent. I was nervous, I had never seen a druid, and I wasnÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t much looking forward to fighting one. ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¦Ã¢â¬ÅXaivier.ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬ÃâÃ

Gah, sorry I haven't come out with anything new in a long while. My home computer is shot, motherboard went out, and seeing as it is very old anyway I am just getting a new one. Not gonna be at my house for another week or so though, they are stupid. I will try to get something new up as soon as I can though.

Hmm, interesting. I didn't like one part though It just seems a bit farfetched that a number of fully armored soldiers could be taken down from weakened, beaten man from the desert. I mean after he turned into the demon thing, okay, but before hand . . . well, this guy must be tough. It did remind me a bit of my old Legend of the Dragon Sword though. Guys got like aspects of the dragon and tore through anything like this guy is with his demon form thingy. keep adding to it though, and I will keep reading it. Maybe have like flashes of memories of what happened to him in that place come back as he fights, i dunno.