First Fakes (3)

[Sir_Erderik]

Read some tutorials, downloaded some font's, got some other stuff ready and made me some fakes. Theses are my firsts so theres probly guna be a bunch of flaws, but I feel they look alright.

 

 

 

 

 

1. Simple chatbox about autos.

 

 

 

 

2. Just the game screen, no chatbox or anything.

 

 

 

 

3. Newest fake, made it today. Tell me if its inappropriate or something.

 

 

 

 

More to come, keep checking the title for updates.

[ThruItAll]

Only fault I see is no * after the chat which you are going to say.

[Wisp]

3rd one isn't to great, there are typos and chat and stuff like that.

 

I think the second is the best.

[LeonardMart]

Only fault I see is no * after the chat which you are going to say.

 

thats only if he hasnt wrote anything yet.

 

 

 

the first looks good, but (yes i am very picky!) you made some errors misusing the " 's "

 

 

 

for the second i would have avoided the "inspect hops" and write "jump-attack farmer" or the like :lol: its still great!

 

 

 

in the third one you wrote "put the otion on the skin". add the "l"

 

always remember to turn off private chat

 

and that zammy book looks cheap

 

 

 

you could post two of your fakes on the FOTW, by the way. click my underbanner in my sig :wink:

[Sir_Erderik]

Thanks, I'll see about entering the FOTW. I'll fix those problems now.

[Sharcoth]

:lol: the second one owns!