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J_Rod_The_Ti

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The brushing doesn't appear to be anything really amazing. I'm assuming it's meant to be clouds... and if so, you should make them somewhat transparent to give depth. It just looks like a big.. glob of something, over the render.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

As for the landscape, there's not much to say. There's too much shadow to see the surface map hardly, almost the entire or at least major parts of the atmo. are blocked by the brushing, and the terrain isn't very good. It's just rather jagged bumps on the land, and some very oddly shaped mountains/hills. they need to be sloped more, and have a bit more flow.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

In overall, I'd get it a 6.8/10, but I hate giving ratings, so pay no attention to that lol.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

~Cal

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it looks rubbish if you ask me. thats my opinion, so no nooby little flames like stay out of my post or any of that rubbish. its just plain not good

 

 

 

say why you think it sucks not just that it sucks, how will that lead to him fixing the piece

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You could make the font a different colour so it stands out...And yeah, i would put some transparancy on the clouds do give it the 'real' effect.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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