i dont consider myself a writer, but i just got an idea and wrote it, please rate, also looking for a good name

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Ch. 1 Seeds of Madness

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

-This is a tale of great sorrow and regret, but it begins on a peaceful day in the city of Varrok. On this day, a child was born to a noble family. His parents gave him the name Sirus.

 

 

 

-Shortly after his birth, Sirus was kidnapped by an organization known as Phoenix. The reason for this crime is unknown, but it is believed that it was for ransom or political sway.

 

 

 

-Several months passed and the demands of Phoenix were not met. SirusÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢ mother fell ill and passed away within a week. The father, now alone in the world, fell into a deep depression. In a blind fury, he took up his sword and made a desperate attack on PhoenixÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢s hideout to retrieve his son. He slayed many thieves, but was downed by their leader, Straven.

 

 

 

-Straven felt obligated to care for the young child after he killed his father, and the other members saw potential in having a noble in Phoenix. Several years passed during which Sirus trained under Straven as soon as he became of age. When Sirus was fourteen, Straven decided to reveal the truth of who his parent were and how they died. Sirus went to bed pondering this and vowed to get revenge. A voice spoke to him in his dreams, a voice of great evil far beyond what he could comprehend.

 

 

 

-Before the sun rose, Sirus stole away to PhoenixÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢s weapons store and picked out a selection of swords and daggers, which he hid in his clothes, and a crossbow he slung across his back. He stabbed many of the thieves in their sleep, but striven awoke to Sirus holding a bloodstained blade.

 

 

 

-ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¦Ã¢â¬ÅSirus, what have youÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâæ?ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬ÃâÃ

Nice concept I guess... but will this continue on? Sirus got his revenge but now what?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Oh well, it's good. :)

well, he still has to deal with an unforseen event, half the second is written

yay chapter 2! written in school...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Ch. 2 ~ Madness Takes Root

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

-Sirus left the hideout intending to depart from town to seek his intentions, but was stopped by a ragged old man. He presented Sirus with an elegantly curved crimson sword.

 

 

 

-"Take itÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâæ evilÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâæ don't let them take meÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâæ you have it!" the old man said between incoherent mutterings. Sirus took the blade and it lopped off the man's head as if of its own accord.

 

 

 

-The history of this weapon is a gruesome one, but if Sirus had known of it, his lust for the blade would only have been strengthened. Thousands of years before, a warrior strived to conquer all. He went to a powerful wizard to have his sword enchanted. But he was fooled; the wizard was a necromancer who cast a powerful curse upon the blade. It has tasted the blood of many since that time and it has absorbed the soul of each.

 

 

 

-For many months Sirus wandered the earth in his depression. He threw himself against countless dragons, demons, and men, but death would not come, he slayed them all.

 

 

 

-The sword fed its spirits into Sirus until they took complete control. His conscious was nothing but a speck in the depth of his mind. The spirits could then flow freely between his body and his blade.

 

 

 

-Sirus' wanderings lead him to a mysterious cave in a plague-infested town. He didn't hear the whispered voices from the caver as they were overshadowed by his own. As he ventured deeper into the pass, he came upon a large temple. As he entered he was blasted to the ceiling.

 

 

 

-"Who dares invade this place?" hissed Lord Iban.

 

 

 

-Sirus made no answer but begun the battle immediatly. The power of his souls negated Iban's magic, and he rushed forward. Sirus channeled all his souls into his sword making it glow with a piercing scream. He cut through Iban's magic and Iban himself. The force of the dark energy escaping from Iban flung the sword into the well of souls. The well drained as the sword absorbed the souls. The blade exploded, destroying the well with it. All of the spirits had to go somewhere, and were channeled into the nearest vessel - Sirus.

 

 

 

-Iban's powerful spirit soon took control. He picked up his staff and departed from the cavern.