I have way too many requests so I try and do them fast, this took maybe 10 minutes but I doubt it but I'm really busy atm. I don't like it but the person that requested is content, though I will be editing a new one.

 

 

 

Anyways, rate out of 10 for now please, I wanna see a difference when I'm 'done' with it.

 

 

 

Edit: Oh two more things, one, not really my style, also why I don't like it's current state, I rarely do cartoony anime mellow stuff, two, critiques and additions please. I won't be near a comp. for a while so whatever you think I should do to it would be appreciated and I will check up.

 

 

 

Nighty Night.

I would give it a 1/10.

 

 

 

-The render is blended at all and it's too sharp.

 

-Border, too complicated. Usually a 1px one color border or movie border is great.

 

-Text isn't blended at all, takes the focus out of the render.

 

-Background has just few brushings on it, too little amount of effect.

 

-Lighting is bit out.

 

 

 

Try to work on those things.