the_drunk_dude Posted July 31, 2007 Share Posted July 31, 2007 I have way too many requests so I try and do them fast, this took maybe 10 minutes but I doubt it but I'm really busy atm. I don't like it but the person that requested is content, though I will be editing a new one. Anyways, rate out of 10 for now please, I wanna see a difference when I'm 'done' with it. Edit: Oh two more things, one, not really my style, also why I don't like it's current state, I rarely do cartoony anime mellow stuff, two, critiques and additions please. I won't be near a comp. for a while so whatever you think I should do to it would be appreciated and I will check up. Nighty Night. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
runemetsa Posted July 31, 2007 Share Posted July 31, 2007 I would give it a 1/10. -The render is blended at all and it's too sharp. -Border, too complicated. Usually a 1px one color border or movie border is great. -Text isn't blended at all, takes the focus out of the render. -Background has just few brushings on it, too little amount of effect. -Lighting is bit out. Try to work on those things. [Star Wreck][PM me][My gallery][DeviantArt][Cool T-shirts!][iron Sky - Trailer is now out!] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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