In a little town a tree called the camper was the shade and hope of the little town. This tree was populated with little sprites from all over china and today was a get together tht happens every century and in one day it would be the day that the Sentinia crystal shines its gazing light out so everyone could see. The day before always was hard to rest because there was so much stuff to do but this time on that day there most reliable helper died of oclireser which is a highly piosonousfruit which is always mistakenfor a apple. They couldnt host the party with-out a tall friend. They sent out puzzles to the village none of them found and they sent one last one out so luck and eventually it was found by a short teenager named Adam Fisher. He was from UK and came because he had problems with using his hands to make things too much and used his teachers desk to make a coffee table. He tried to figure the puzzle out but he didnt understand wat it was. Fially he found out it was like a ribix cube yet it had to make a famous sprite painting. Once he put it together he was trans ported to Giadowa a training fecility in the clouds.

 

 

 

To be continued...

 

 

 

pandawiz3 \

Slightly difficult to understand...but it was good.

 

Seems unfair to rate it before I have more stuff to compare it to...

i made a new one and i no one person who commented on it saying they lked it but it was too short its just at 400 am my mom comes to my room and tells me to go to bed :wall: . im writing more to it and its just your book was so cool and its not right for someone to judge it because its not the way they like it because you put so much work into that story and i am just saying comaped to most long stories i've read yours was the best you seriously could publish it because before my friends father died he published a book "On Solid Ground". He died in a jumping accident in fort bragg. :cry:

i made a new one and i no one person who commented on it saying they lked it but it was too short its just at 400 am my mom comes to my room and tells me to go to bed :wall: . im writing more to it and its just your book was so cool and its not right for someone to judge it because its not the way they like it because you put so much work into that story and i am just saying comaped to most long stories i've read yours was the best you seriously could publish it because before my friends father died he published a book "On Solid Ground". He died in a jumping accident in fort bragg. :cry:

 

 

 

English, please?

 

 

 

Who's book?

 

 

 

Consult the language guide on the top, please. You are speaking lazy speak, as I call it, putting "No" instead of "Know" and not capitalizing I's. Please please please, we like it sensible in this library. Work on your writing. :)