Scourgedit: The headline from the other thread was here but heres proof I wrote it. http://forum.tip.it/viewtopic.php?t=686019

 

 

 

Ok so, I was listening to Powerslave, by Maiden, and everything seemed to fit in.

 

 

 

I was walking down the street while listening to it, and the drum beats and power chords seemed to fit in the events. Like an old woman fell, and the constant high hat thrashing was occuring when the bus was heading towards her, I JUST managed to get her out of the way when the bus crashed into a nearby tree.

 

 

 

I then tried my hardest to get away from the whole scenario

 

 

 

I run past the alleys usually filled with violent gang members and homeless people attacking you for money. I barley made it out. My shirt was torn and I had a cut on my arm.

 

 

 

I ran to a friend's house and he was in a bad mood so he started throwing things at me. He locked the doors. It was like being in some kinda house of the dead movie. Anyway, I threw a lamp through a window and ran out.

 

 

 

I knew I couldn't return home. I was halfway across town and my family was very agitated and probably didn't wanna be bothered. So I decided to go anyway so I took the bus. The scary thing was, it was the same bus that crashed! Same driver too. So anyway, I turned my maiden CD back on and powerslave came on. THE SAME THING HAPPENED! An old woman jumped out of the way of the bus and it crashed into a tree!

 

 

 

I climbed barley walking out the door.

 

I then went to the park. But a couple of guys they were up to no good. Started makin trouble in my neighborhood. I got in one little fight and my mom got scared said...

 

 

 

"You're movin with your auntie and uncle in bel air!!!"

 

 

 

so I whistled for a cab and when it came near, the license plate said fresh and had a dice in the mirror

 

In any case I thought this cab was weird but I thought "Nah, forget it" yo home to bel air!!!

Posted: Sun Aug 05, 2007 8:14 am Post subject: By Golly this was scary

 

3. Only original works will be allowed. Do not post any literary works that are not of your own.

 

Tip for stealing peoples works...get rid of the header before you post. Otherwise the story was very bitty and didn't really have alot of meaning behind it....The law of averages says that these things happen....

 

 

 

Also the songs often seem like they are somehow related to us, its the reason why we are supposed to like them. If you heard a song that had nothing in common with you the chances are that you would not like it.

 

 

 

But to be honest it didn't really get me interested. There was nothing that made me thing Oooo what happened next, because it wasn't well put together.

 

This happen, and then this and finally something else...

 

Hardly riverting stuff...

I wrote this. I posted this in the off topic forum by mistake

 

 

 

Scourgedit: Link http://forum.tip.it/viewtopic.php?t=686019

O....k so how exactly is this fiction if this actually happened to you?

 

If anything is is a blog of some type...and so according to the Blog Scape Rules...

 

Topics that belong on other boards:

 

-Real life stories (Off Topic)

 

 

 

Congratulations you posted in the right forum...Go back there and complain...or if it was fiction then take it back and improve it...make it better by adding more details, more links more stuff like that...Otherwise its really just annoying...

 

 

 

Edit: And since the entire thing is basied on a song...which you apparently didn't write, you are breaking this rule....again:

 

3. Only original works will be allowed. Do not post any literary works that are not of your own.

 

So it either happened to you and it needs to go in off topic(according to BlogScape Rules) or you need to rewrite it...

 

 

 

Sorry for being harsh....but it is only a half page, and is basied mainly on a comparison you made between your life and a song....and then you just stuck a theme tune on the end that was stolen from TV program. So its hardly something that took a long time to do....So it really does belong in Off-Topic....if you want to complain to the mods, then I think its a good idea.

Well I did post in off topic but a moderator said "All fiction stories must go in the varrock library" or something. Nevermind.

 

 

 

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