Merry's Poetry (Please tell me what you think)

[Merry]

I've decided I have too many poems to just have a forum for each... :lol:

 

 

 

So heres a forum for My poetry. I hope you Enjoy. :D

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

And Feel free to comment on my poetry. :D

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I'll try not to take anything TOO personal. :)

[Merry]

This Poem I wrote about 3-4 years ago...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

My feelings

 

 

 

I cannot express

 

 

 

for fear of others

 

 

 

and my want to impress

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Their Bottled Up

 

 

 

Oh so much

 

 

 

that people must be weary

 

 

 

of explosion at touch

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

My Heart aches

 

 

 

for I want to explain

 

 

 

but my hopes to

 

 

 

are very much in vain

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

People around me

 

 

 

expect me to be good

 

 

 

so expressing my feelings

 

 

 

is something I wish I could

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I cannot cry

 

 

 

for they say "don't go there"

 

 

 

so I keep it inside

 

 

 

never for others to know or me to share

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

so I save it for nights

 

 

 

when everyone's asleep

 

 

 

I cry in my pillow

 

 

 

so they won't hear a peep

[Merry]

yet another, I hope you enjoy...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Here I lay all alone

 

 

 

in this place I call my own

 

 

 

but does not feel like home sweet home

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

here I am feeling so alone

 

 

 

though people are all around me

 

 

 

my loneliness is still unknown

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Though moments would come

 

 

 

when I'd feel not like the only one

 

 

 

moments where when I'd have fun

 

 

 

not on my own, but with everyone

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

times like those

 

 

 

seam few and far

 

 

 

and moments have arose

 

 

 

when it seams hard to bare

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

So I try and find ways

 

 

 

to sooth away the pain

 

 

 

and I try to fill my days

 

 

 

though the loneliness remain

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

here I am remembering

 

 

 

moments went by, and now is gone

 

 

 

to sooth my pain I sing

 

 

 

that is why I write this song

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

hoping it will help time go by

 

 

 

and bring another restful night

 

 

 

so there I'll lie

 

 

 

in the moons soothing light

[Merry]

Yes, Another Poem. I told you I had a lot...lol

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

See ya later

 

 

 

not goodbye

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

as I wave

 

 

 

I'll heave a sigh

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

you made me happy

 

 

 

you made me smile

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

but now your leaving

 

 

 

for a little while

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I'll miss you dear

 

 

 

I'll miss you really bad

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

and to think about you leaving

 

 

 

makes me really really sad

[Merry]

This is accually a song...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I continue to try

 

 

 

yet I keep on failing

 

 

 

when I fail I cry

 

 

 

with frustration and wailing

 

 

 

the work seems too hard

 

 

 

but I continue trying

 

 

 

when I once again fail, feeling like a [developmentally delayed]

 

 

 

so upset I keep crying

 

 

 

failing I succeed at

 

 

 

I'm learning to do better

 

 

 

I've got it bout down flat

 

 

 

with his help I'll be greater

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I know sometimes all around you there's troubles

 

 

 

so much to endure with heartache and turmoil

 

 

 

but there is still hope and to God I'll be Loyal

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I'm getting quite drained

 

 

 

my emotions are flowing

 

 

 

let hope still remained

 

 

 

and my faith is still growing

 

 

 

my troubles seem few

 

 

 

to the ailments of others

 

 

 

but God will renew

 

 

 

our Joy, Oh my brothers

 

 

 

failing I succeed at

 

 

 

I'm learning to do better

 

 

 

I've got it bout down flat

 

 

 

with his help I'll be greater

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I know sometimes all around you there's troubles

 

 

 

so much to endure with heartache and turmoil

 

 

 

but there is still hope and to God I am Loyal

[Merry]

when I once again fail, feeling like a mentally challenged

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

It changed the last word in my song to Mentally challenged! lol. Oh well you get the drift. lol.

[Merry]

I'm really not this dark and offlicted...I was listening to Evanesence at the time...lol.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Shadows come as Shadows will

 

 

 

my soul becomes deathly Ill

 

 

 

in the stillness time goes by

 

 

 

in the darkness I heave a sigh

 

 

 

what becomes of me I cry

 

 

 

praying my pain would just plain DIE!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Wishing time would rewind

 

 

 

just so that I could find

 

 

 

the moment when this all began

 

 

 

and maybe then I'd find the end

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I thrust myself upon the bed

 

 

 

seeking comfort for a soul almost dead

 

 

 

in the darkness all around

 

 

 

I seek,I search, I haven't found

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Quietly I lay inside

 

 

 

my eyes still open wide

 

 

 

the tears no longer are

 

 

 

while comfort still seems so far

[Merry]

Thats all for now...Hope you enjoyed...

[Merry]

No one seems interested in my poetry...

[Merry]

Just so you know...

 

 

 

Here is a few links to my other poetry I posted on the board...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

http://forum.tip.it/viewtopic.php?t=188201

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

http://forum.tip.it/viewtopic.php?t=188157

[Merry]

Hmm... will no one comment about my poetry? :?

 

 

 

I would be grateful to anyone who would give me any insight.

 

 

 

Thank You! :D

[pjb21]

ok, im nice. i quite like it its good. kinda sad tone to the poems, but its good.yer i like it what bout evry one else?

[Merry]

Thanks for commenting. Also If you'd like I'd suguest clicking the links on the one post. it will direct you to two other poems. I was just to lazy to re-post it. The two linked are two of my favorites.

[Merry]

(heres once again, Another.)

 

 

 

A true friend

 

 

 

Is hard to find

 

 

 

Today right now

 

 

 

In this world

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

What is a true friend

 

 

 

Is it a friend

 

 

 

Whom you can ALWAYS depend

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

A true friend

 

 

 

Is hard to find

 

 

 

Today right now

 

 

 

In this world

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

What is a true friend

 

 

 

Is it a friend

 

 

 

WhoÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢ll always care

 

 

 

Who will always comforts you

 

 

 

When thereÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢s no one else anywhere

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

A true friend

 

 

 

Is hard to find

 

 

 

Today right now

 

 

 

In this world

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

When you give up

 

 

 

When you despair.

 

 

 

Remember this heÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢s everywhere

[Merry]

Heres some more, I'll post two in the same post.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I feel a presence of someone

 

 

 

Someone unlike no other person

 

 

 

I canÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t see them

 

 

 

I canÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t even touch them

 

 

 

But I know theyÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢re there

 

 

 

Because the bible says their everywhere

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

And then another...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Wild flowers,

 

 

 

In a field,

 

 

 

Swaying towers,

 

 

 

In the breeze,

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Wild Flowers,

 

 

 

Everywhere,

 

 

 

Spring showers,

 

 

 

Refreshing flowers,

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

BeeÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢s a buzzing.

 

 

 

Carrying pollen,

 

 

 

To and fro,

 

 

 

In the field,

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Happy days,

 

 

 

In the field,

 

 

 

Different ways,

 

 

 

n having fun,

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

All made by God,

 

 

 

My heavenly father,

 

 

 

Shining brightly,

 

 

 

Like golden rod

[Merry]

(last poem for now, please give me more comments.)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

This poem I wrote for my friend a few years back who was extremely depressed...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

My dear friend

 

 

 

I pray you would

 

 

 

Embrace your life.

 

 

 

I think you should

 

 

 

Do your best

 

 

 

Be proud of yourself

 

 

 

And all your success

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

this is my plea

 

 

 

don't hurt yourself

 

 

 

because you've lost all your glea

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

YouÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢re my friend

 

 

 

If you need me

 

 

 

you can depend

 

 

 

on me to help you out

 

 

 

because I care

 

 

 

so just give me a shout

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

people love you

 

 

 

people care

 

 

 

about what you do

 

 

 

So don't you fear

[Merry]

My dear friend

 

 

 

I pray you would

 

 

 

Embrace your life.

 

 

 

I think you should

 

 

 

Do your best

 

 

 

Be proud of yourself

 

 

 

And all your success

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

this is my plea

 

 

 

don't hurt yourself

 

 

 

because you've lost all your glea

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

YouÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢re my friend

 

 

 

If you need me

 

 

 

you can depend

 

 

 

on me to help you out

 

 

 

because I care

 

 

 

so just give me a shout

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

people love you

 

 

 

people care

 

 

 

about what you do

 

 

 

So don't you fear