Hello.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I just drew this, but due to a really...Rubbish...Scanner. It didn't turn out as well as it should have. Please rate and suggest ways i can improve.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

As you can see, my scanner didn't do the picture any justice. You can't see half of the shading.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Please could someone help with the legs too. And i appologise for people to tilting their heads to the right. Ad if you noticed i ain't done on the arms. As they look a bit....wrong.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Ape8191.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

P.S, i'm getting a better scanner soon.

[bleep]s are uneven?

not bad... i like the wings... not too sure on the person tho.. the hands and head look a little wierd

Thanks for your very, i repeat VERY helpfull remark JK.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Ape8191.

Lol, nice drawing bytheway :P

Hehehe, thanks.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Ape8191.

Well, looking ok, but the body is kinda large in proportion to everything else, and JK wasn't too far off either. I kinda sketched over it a bit in ps, but I really can't draw with a mouse so...it looks messed to say the least. This is kinda how it should looks porportions wise. Just ignore the messy lines.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

(Please ignore the complete lack of mouse control here :oops:)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

But good start, and maybe next time shade harder? I find scanners hate light shading. Another way to help is either set your scanner on greyscale or boost the contrast of the pic.

Thanks, yeah i found the body was too big, but then i could be bothered to change it.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Ape8191.