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eh ...................... hmm lets see here, work on shading, too subtle shade changes, try to look at real life things when you shade and see what it looks like and more stuff but whos quert?

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thanks to Etexbleu for the sig

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ouch! :lol:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

just keep on going!

The Enrichment Center reminds you that the weighted companion cube will never threaten to stab you and, in fact, cannot speak.

 

In the event that the weighted companion cube does speak, the Enrichment Center urges you to disregard its advice.

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look to guide of scarlet elv(Punkage)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

that's what i did, and i used some shading tips from it. does it look any better? what else can i make better?

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pls dont take any offense this is constructive critism, dont come after me in rl

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

the drawings are ugly

 

 

 

the shading is horrible

 

 

 

perspective is way off

 

 

 

u gotta color everything :roll:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

and sumore stuff but i can't see the pic so this is from memory

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thanks to Etexbleu for the sig

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none taken, but can i ask why you said i should colour everything..? the robes are ment to be white

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ok, i've moved the dead zammy monk forward so he doesn't look like a hge giant on the floor

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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i've also shaded the ground, and added some background stuff

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

any better?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

also, what should i work on with the people?

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