October 22, 200718 yr This is Part I of a series im writing, so please give your views on the first chapter. I will asterisk out the middle letters of swearwords, but if they sould be completely asterisked out please tell me. All comments welcome. Cowboys from Hell [hide=Book I Searching] [hide=Chapter 1]The valiant steedÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢s engine grumbled out of power as harsh cold wind began to blow across the baron desert. The deep black sky shone with the light of thousands of stars, each singing a song of conscious life, in a joyous celebration of the ability to think. ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¦Ã¢â¬ÅS***ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬ÃâÃ
October 22, 200718 yr cool, but I prefer them all astericked out. I'll show you how terrifying a true Christian can be!It's Xewleer: ZEW le ar, got it memorized?Hermit of the Varrock Library and its proud guard.
October 22, 200718 yr Author I will do that with some of them, but editing out out a four letter words, could be editing out soemthing else, which I didnt want to do, Ill just the first letter from now on
October 22, 200718 yr Wow, thats good. Im thinking about doing fan fiction for Harry Potter in the future when I have a bigger knowledge about the series.
October 22, 200718 yr Author ATM there is no name for the Main character, he is under the workign title of Caleb Jones, but I would like suggestions of other names please :D
October 22, 200718 yr Harry Equine I'll show you how terrifying a true Christian can be!It's Xewleer: ZEW le ar, got it memorized?Hermit of the Varrock Library and its proud guard.
October 23, 200718 yr Author Chapter two now added to my original post, all further chapters will be added in this way.
November 6, 200718 yr Um.... The story is pretty decent except for the title. As much as I like pantera I have to say..... No man. Other than that nice job. Keep it up!
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