ironmaiden666 Posted October 22, 2007 Share Posted October 22, 2007 This is Part I of a series im writing, so please give your views on the first chapter. I will asterisk out the middle letters of swearwords, but if they sould be completely asterisked out please tell me. All comments welcome. Cowboys from Hell [hide=Book I Searching] [hide=Chapter 1]The valiant steedÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢s engine grumbled out of power as harsh cold wind began to blow across the baron desert. The deep black sky shone with the light of thousands of stars, each singing a song of conscious life, in a joyous celebration of the ability to think. ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¦Ã¢â¬ÅS***ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâà Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xewleer Posted October 22, 2007 Share Posted October 22, 2007 cool, but I prefer them all astericked out. I'll show you how terrifying a true Christian can be!It's Xewleer: ZEW le ar, got it memorized?Hermit of the Varrock Library and its proud guard. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ironmaiden666 Posted October 22, 2007 Author Share Posted October 22, 2007 I will do that with some of them, but editing out out a four letter words, could be editing out soemthing else, which I didnt want to do, Ill just the first letter from now on Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TotalTalker Posted October 22, 2007 Share Posted October 22, 2007 Wow, thats good. Im thinking about doing fan fiction for Harry Potter in the future when I have a bigger knowledge about the series. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ironmaiden666 Posted October 22, 2007 Author Share Posted October 22, 2007 ATM there is no name for the Main character, he is under the workign title of Caleb Jones, but I would like suggestions of other names please :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TotalTalker Posted October 22, 2007 Share Posted October 22, 2007 Henroy Legon? Lol, its a bit random. The name just popped into my head. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xewleer Posted October 22, 2007 Share Posted October 22, 2007 Harry Equine I'll show you how terrifying a true Christian can be!It's Xewleer: ZEW le ar, got it memorized?Hermit of the Varrock Library and its proud guard. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ironmaiden666 Posted October 22, 2007 Author Share Posted October 22, 2007 I definately like the last name Equine, very nice I like :P \ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ironmaiden666 Posted October 23, 2007 Author Share Posted October 23, 2007 Chapter two now added to my original post, all further chapters will be added in this way. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ironmaiden666 Posted November 5, 2007 Author Share Posted November 5, 2007 Chapter 3 now up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fist_of_ozzy Posted November 6, 2007 Share Posted November 6, 2007 Um.... The story is pretty decent except for the title. As much as I like pantera I have to say..... No man. Other than that nice job. Keep it up! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Recommended Posts
Create an account or sign in to comment
You need to be a member in order to leave a comment
Create an account
Sign up for a new account in our community. It's easy!
Register a new accountSign in
Already have an account? Sign in here.
Sign In Now