Made it for a friends request rate it out of 10

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

8/10 the river is kind weard :wink:

 

 

 

but good job on that

6-7/10

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

1. The river.. wth.. a river looks nothing like that, it's very distracting and looks terrible

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

2. Her head.. its mushed in.. she looks like a neanderthal, she also has very masculine facial features

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

2. her clothes.. they seem like they just lump, not fit to her body just like her

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

3.skirt... it seems to cut away or her body is at a very odd anle and very odd position

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

4. granite maul.... she doesnt seem to be holding it at all it looks weird how it is

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

5. the shadows.. the rock and helmet have shadows yet the main person firs tree bush on right and kitty have none, also the shadows are going towards the sun.. thats not right

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

6. the helmet and boots seem to be just sitting there for nothing... why would she set them on the other side of the river? and they look odd IMHo

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

7.Opps forget...her hair... it seems to be one gellatonous blob instead of single strands like it is

6-7/10

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

1. The river.. wth.. a river looks nothing like that, it's very distracting and looks terrible

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

2. Her head.. its mushed in.. she looks like a neanderthal, she also has very masculine facial features

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

2. her clothes.. they seem like they just lump, not fit to her body just like her

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

3.skirt... it seems to cut away or her body is at a very odd anle and very odd position

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

4. granite maul.... she doesnt seem to be holding it at all it looks weird how it is

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

5. the shadows.. the rock and helmet have shadows yet the main person firs tree bush on right and kitty have none, also the shadows are going towards the sun.. thats not right

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

6. the helmet and boots seem to be just sitting there for nothing... why would she set them on the other side of the river? and they look odd IMHo

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

7.Opps forget...her hair... it seems to be one gellatonous blob instead of single strands like it is

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

she said that it was ment to be that she bashed the person with maul and all was left was the boots and med

i only changed parts your pointed out i thought needed to be changed too

6-7/10

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

1. The river.. wth.. a river looks nothing like that, it's very distracting and looks terrible

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

2. Her head.. its mushed in.. she looks like a neanderthal, she also has very masculine facial features

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

2. her clothes.. they seem like they just lump, not fit to her body just like her

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

3.skirt... it seems to cut away or her body is at a very odd anle and very odd position

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

4. granite maul.... she doesnt seem to be holding it at all it looks weird how it is

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

5. the shadows.. the rock and helmet have shadows yet the main person firs tree bush on right and kitty have none, also the shadows are going towards the sun.. thats not right

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

6. the helmet and boots seem to be just sitting there for nothing... why would she set them on the other side of the river? and they look odd IMHo

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

7.Opps forget...her hair... it seems to be one gellatonous blob instead of single strands like it is

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I agree... also if u changed it.... the person still doesnt look like shes holding the maul

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

also imo the ear looks too big and has no ear hole thing

oops ear hole i do that now

lol a man with breasts!!! her face looks like man add a beard :D

its hot plx

lol a man with breasts!!! her face looks like man add a beard :D

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

id like to see your try

sorry but her face does look like a man. :(

ah well all i can do is my best

i dont see anything...

There is no hiding it any longer. Auicroa, your blind. I'm sorry it had to be broken to you this way.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

^Roffle^

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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the boobs look pointy instead of them being round and vuluptious