Advice and help please

[Jopie211]

Ok, I'm not going to lie since that won't help you improve.

 

 

 

It's really bad. The flames and clouds look very unrealistic. The fire looks like it's a bunch of red coloured leaves. The angel's wings are strange. I'd strongly recommend to look up some photos of fire and clouds, that might help.

 

 

 

Secondly, you hardly did anything apart from taking buddies and adding some ugly stuff to it. TBH, I can't believe you spent more than an hour on this. Text is bad as well.

 

 

 

I realise these are really harsh comments, but I'm not going to say I like what you made when I actually don't at all. Look up some pixel tutorials and keep practising. Everyone was a beginner once, but with the help of comments and tutorials you will get better, believe me.

 

 

 

Good luck.