All comments except flames appreciated :)

Reworked a little

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

from what i can see (i dont see well) you only have one layer of shading

 

 

 

but i do like the cartoon style and the teeth on the mask are a tad big in my opinoin and why is he so scared of the money or is he just overwhelmed? and maybe add somthing to the wall

BAD:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

-Skin color is horrible.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

- not liking the cartoony style at all, isn't very pixely looking.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

- Very limited shading. Need alot more.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

- The idea is booring. No offense, but the whole "i'm the richest person in the world" sig idea gets old, fast.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

- Its just simple. It has no "wow" factor to it.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

GOOD:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

- At least you saved it in the correct format.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

-Has a boarder, thank god.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

- Some of the lineart isn't bad.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

NEED TO WORK ON:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

- Lineart. Give your characters a more realistic look. Its hard yes, but if you can't draw, don't pixel.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

- Shading. Right now you only change to like one other shade for it. You need a LOT of shading. Also, keep in mind shading is not only just going light to dark, but giving an image depth as well, which this lacks.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

- Ideas. try and come up with something more origonal than the whole I'm richer than everyone thing. It gets old.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

p.s: I put behind the fact that I strongly dislike you for the C&C.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

~nadril

You never know if I'm gonna manipulate the Sig Market. Thanks for the C/C Nadril.

I'll give you one mill per sig I do if you manage to raise pixel prices to 10m ea >.><.<

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

:lol: