Death Mistress

[Hopius]

Sigh, Im gonna make a new story( I hope this would be successful!)

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Prologue: The waiting has ended

 

 

 

"Father send me!"the young teenager shouted. This teenager is Kevin Penlite, son of Seri Penlite, principal of School of War and Magics(Or simply SWM). Kevin is only fifteen years old, his hair is short and brown, his body is hard like rock, and indeed, good-looking. He is a warrior, full of pride and dignity. He wore armor made of pure gold, his sword is the legendary Excalibur.

 

 

 

SWM trains magicians and warrior who have potential, dividing warriors from magicians.

 

 

 

"I cannot let that happen!"Seri, the old principal, shouted. "You are not worthy to fight him, the Dark Lord",

 

 

 

"Who do you think can fight him?!"Kevin asked furiously, after all he is the best warrior in the school.

 

 

 

"The chosen elf..."Seri silently muttered, his lips trembling, "The Death Mistress...",

 

 

 

"You think the elves exist"Kevin said harshly, "Even if they exist, they were destroyed fourty years ago!". Seri stood there, silent and calm, convinced, but a student came running, panting.

 

 

 

"Sir, a female elf is coming!"the student shouted excitedly, "The last kind of her race!", Seri half-smiled.

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Chapter One: The Chosen One

 

 

 

Raquel lowered her head, thousands of students were glaring at her. 'What are they looking at?! My ears?!'she thought angrily. Raquel is only fifteen years old, she has long, purplish curly hair, her body is like a perfectly chiseled statue, her face is beautiful face is similar to a goddess, she has long-pointed ears.

 

 

 

An old man approached him, beside the man was a brown-haired warrior who looked arrogant and angry.

 

 

 

"Child! We have been waiting for you!"the old man shouted, this man is Seri.

 

 

 

"Er- How is that?"she asked curiously,

 

 

 

"In time you will know"the brown-haired warrior interrupted.

 

 

 

"Come my dear child"the old man said as he gestured a helping hand, she followed him, she was brought inside the shool. The school was perfectly beautiful, the buildings were built with hard, polished granite, the floor was tiled with marbles. A well stood in the middle of the campus, it was made of granite too.

 

 

 

"Child, look in the well"Seri smiled, "You will see your destiny, it's either become a magician or warrior",

 

 

 

"What?!"she exclaimed, half-excited, half-nervous. "But I didn't ask that!",

 

 

 

"Like my father said, it is your destiny"Kevin interrupted, again. She looked in the well, the water started to boil, smoke steamed out of it.

 

 

 

"Concentrate on the water, not the steam"Kevin instructed arrogantly, "Then tell us what you see",

 

 

 

She looked deeply at the water, "I see- I see an orb..."she murmured, magicians cheered with delight, "Wait! It's forming again! It's a- a magician wearing-wearing a cloak, his eyes are- are pure red", everyone was stunned, other shivered.

 

 

 

"Magician!"Seri shouted, trying to stop the eerie silence, there were only a few claps, everyone was shocked and scared because of the vision, vision of the Dark Lord, Dark Lord Kelloth.

[Hopius]

Ummm... In describing a person, do you need to use present tense or past tense? I think its present tense, right?

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Chapter Two: Two years later..

 

 

 

Two years later, Raquel mastered the skill magic, she shall be a magician this coming week.Full-fledged magicians are given spheres such as fire spheres, water spheres and earth spheres. Each sphere is made up of glass, wood and it's element. Raquel hoped that she would get a fire sphere.

 

 

 

"Tanya, I can't wait, I want to recieve my card now!"she said nervously to her friend, Tanya. Tanya is also seventeen years old, red-haired, beautiful face, and has fair skin like Raquel.

 

 

 

"Me either! I'm sure I'll only have B++ at Hexes!"Tanya responded nervously, after all, she wants to be a Healer magician. There was a sudden bang at the door, two red envelopes appeared at the bottom. "The cards!"both oof them exclaimed.

 

 

 

Raquel opened the envelope with the name, Raquel Geron. She opened it, revealing her grades:

 

 

 

School Of War and Magics

 

Report Card

 

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Name:Raquel Geron

 

Will be Occupation:Caster Magician

 

 

 

Fire Magic- A+++

 

Air Magic- A++

 

Earth Magic- A++

 

Water Magic- A+

 

Hexes- A

 

Conduct- A++

 

 

 

This student will be graduating/retained.

 

NOTE: The graduation will occur at July the 3rd, 7PM, at the school hall.

 

 

 

"Tanya, I've got good grades!"she exclaimed in joy, she looked at her friend who was sobbing. "What happened?", Tanya did not answer, she just pointed at Hexes, which was only B.

 

 

 

"At least you will be graduating!"she encouraged, hugging her friend. At last, she will be graduating.......

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Chapter Three: The Dark Lord at the graduation

 

 

 

Raquel watched as students were given spheres, Tanya had the healing sphere. "Raquel Geron!"the announcer called, Raquel walked towards the big stage. 'What sphere will they give'she thought, imaginations entering her brain.

 

 

 

She was only half way far when the whole place darkened, the wind blew hard, glasses exploded and shattere dinto pieces. Everyone was silent, each of them hiding under their seats. Raquel was the only one, standing curiously. A blaze of black fire rose in the middle of the stage, it faded, an old man appeared.

 

 

 

This man wore a purple cloak and hood, his eyes are blood-red, his skin is full of wrinkles. Many screamed, but noone left the room. "Silence!"the starnger shouted angrily,his voice was deep and scary. "You dare to defy me magicians and warriors! I know your plots in killing me! Well let me give a warning, to regret your doings!", people huddled trying to avoid the wrath of Kelloth.

 

 

 

He saw Raquel still standing, he came closer and was shocked to see her pointed-ears. He forcefully smiled and said, "I didn't know that my minions weren't able to dispose you, tell me child who is your mother?",

 

 

 

"The l-last thi-thing I remembe-ber is tha-that my mother's name i-is Wendll"she said, her legs in lips were trembling with fear.

 

 

 

"So you are the Death Mistress, the prophecied one, the chosen one"Kelloth said/ looking disgusted, "Once I failed to kill you, but now, you shall die painfully",

 

 

 

Kelloth clutched a black sphere from his robes, it was the Elder Darkness Sphere, an image of a skull was inside of it. "I shall kill you with the most evil curse I know, the most painful I know"he smiled then laughed maliciously. He muttered words of strange language, black-purplish energy came out from the sphere, it formed on top of Kelloth, making a devastating ball of darkness.

 

 

 

"This is the Dark curse, enough to kill hundreds of life"he smiled then released it, it strucked Raquel, she felt pain scattered all around her body. She screamed in agony, she felt every inch of her skin is being burned, then she felt normal again, she was weak and heard a large scream of pain, pain of immense agony. She saw the blurred image of Kelloth teleporting, his robes and body was burning with black fire. Then there was darkness, everything turned black, she lost her senses...

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