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Chapter Three: The Dark Lord at the graduation Raquel watched as students were given spheres, Tanya had the healing sphere. "Raquel Geron!"the announcer called, Raquel walked towards the big stage. 'What sphere will they give'she thought, imaginations entering her brain. She was only half way far when the whole place darkened, the wind blew hard, glasses exploded and shattere dinto pieces. Everyone was silent, each of them hiding under their seats. Raquel was the only one, standing curiously. A blaze of black fire rose in the middle of the stage, it faded, an old man appeared. This man wore a purple cloak and hood, his eyes are blood-red, his skin is full of wrinkles. Many screamed, but noone left the room. "Silence!"the starnger shouted angrily,his voice was deep and scary. "You dare to defy me magicians and warriors! I know your plots in killing me! Well let me give a warning, to regret your doings!", people huddled trying to avoid the wrath of Kelloth. He saw Raquel still standing, he came closer and was shocked to see her pointed-ears. He forcefully smiled and said, "I didn't know that my minions weren't able to dispose you, tell me child who is your mother?", "The l-last thi-thing I remembe-ber is tha-that my mother's name i-is Wendll"she said, her legs in lips were trembling with fear. "So you are the Death Mistress, the prophecied one, the chosen one"Kelloth said/ looking disgusted, "Once I failed to kill you, but now, you shall die painfully", Kelloth clutched a black sphere from his robes, it was the Elder Darkness Sphere, an image of a skull was inside of it. "I shall kill you with the most evil curse I know, the most painful I know"he smiled then laughed maliciously. He muttered words of strange language, black-purplish energy came out from the sphere, it formed on top of Kelloth, making a devastating ball of darkness. "This is the Dark curse, enough to kill hundreds of life"he smiled then released it, it strucked Raquel, she felt pain scattered all around her body. She screamed in agony, she felt every inch of her skin is being burned, then she felt normal again, she was weak and heard a large scream of pain, pain of immense agony. She saw the blurred image of Kelloth teleporting, his robes and body was burning with black fire. Then there was darkness, everything turned black, she lost her senses...

Chapter Two: Two years later.. Two years later, Raquel mastered the skill magic, she shall be a magician this coming week.Full-fledged magicians are given spheres such as fire spheres, water spheres and earth spheres. Each sphere is made up of glass, wood and it's element. Raquel hoped that she would get a fire sphere. "Tanya, I can't wait, I want to recieve my card now!"she said nervously to her friend, Tanya. Tanya is also seventeen years old, red-haired, beautiful face, and has fair skin like Raquel. "Me either! I'm sure I'll only have B++ at Hexes!"Tanya responded nervously, after all, she wants to be a Healer magician. There was a sudden bang at the door, two red envelopes appeared at the bottom. "The cards!"both oof them exclaimed. Raquel opened the envelope with the name, Raquel Geron. She opened it, revealing her grades: School Of War and Magics Report Card ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Name:Raquel Geron Will be Occupation:Caster Magician Fire Magic- A+++ Air Magic- A++ Earth Magic- A++ Water Magic- A+ Hexes- A Conduct- A++ This student will be graduating/retained. NOTE: The graduation will occur at July the 3rd, 7PM, at the school hall. "Tanya, I've got good grades!"she exclaimed in joy, she looked at her friend who was sobbing. "What happened?", Tanya did not answer, she just pointed at Hexes, which was only B. "At least you will be graduating!"she encouraged, hugging her friend. At last, she will be graduating.......

Ummm... In describing a person, do you need to use present tense or past tense? I think its present tense, right?

Chapter One: The Chosen One Raquel lowered her head, thousands of students were glaring at her. 'What are they looking at?! My ears?!'she thought angrily. Raquel is only fifteen years old, she has long, purplish curly hair, her body is like a perfectly chiseled statue, her face is beautiful face is similar to a goddess, she has long-pointed ears. An old man approached him, beside the man was a brown-haired warrior who looked arrogant and angry. "Child! We have been waiting for you!"the old man shouted, this man is Seri. "Er- How is that?"she asked curiously, "In time you will know"the brown-haired warrior interrupted. "Come my dear child"the old man said as he gestured a helping hand, she followed him, she was brought inside the shool. The school was perfectly beautiful, the buildings were built with hard, polished granite, the floor was tiled with marbles. A well stood in the middle of the campus, it was made of granite too. "Child, look in the well"Seri smiled, "You will see your destiny, it's either become a magician or warrior", "What?!"she exclaimed, half-excited, half-nervous. "But I didn't ask that!", "Like my father said, it is your destiny"Kevin interrupted, again. She looked in the well, the water started to boil, smoke steamed out of it. "Concentrate on the water, not the steam"Kevin instructed arrogantly, "Then tell us what you see", She looked deeply at the water, "I see- I see an orb..."she murmured, magicians cheered with delight, "Wait! It's forming again! It's a- a magician wearing-wearing a cloak, his eyes are- are pure red", everyone was stunned, other shivered. "Magician!"Seri shouted, trying to stop the eerie silence, there were only a few claps, everyone was shocked and scared because of the vision, vision of the Dark Lord, Dark Lord Kelloth.

Prologue: The waiting has ended "Father send me!"the young teenager shouted. This teenager is Kevin Penlite, son of Seri Penlite, principal of School of War and Magics(Or simply SWM). Kevin is only fifteen years old, his hair is short and brown, his body is hard like rock, and indeed, good-looking. He is a warrior, full of pride and dignity. He wore armor made of pure gold, his sword is the legendary Excalibur. SWM trains magicians and warrior who have potential, dividing warriors from magicians. "I cannot let that happen!"Seri, the old principal, shouted. "You are not worthy to fight him, the Dark Lord", "Who do you think can fight him?!"Kevin asked furiously, after all he is the best warrior in the school. "The chosen elf..."Seri silently muttered, his lips trembling, "The Death Mistress...", "You think the elves exist"Kevin said harshly, "Even if they exist, they were destroyed fourty years ago!". Seri stood there, silent and calm, convinced, but a student came running, panting. "Sir, a female elf is coming!"the student shouted excitedly, "The last kind of her race!", Seri half-smiled.

Sigh, Im gonna make a new story( I hope this would be successful!)

That should be Cani cave, its a proper noun. Back in the palace of Shintu, proper noun :) "Get'em all!" ordered General Outane who wore a strong black platebody and a bear helmet. His long, sharp sword had stains of a fallen warrior, this would be a better idea. Its a good story.

Chapter three- Royalties in quarrel "Empress of Hoffley, I am warning you! Velostro's words are sincere, and it is all true!"a tall, old king wearing a cloak in the colors of red, shouted angrily. "How dare you King of Gorazere! We all know that the child is born to be a sorcerer not a white magician! And how dare you to warn me, my kingdom is much more powerful than yours!"the young empress whose robes were made from violet, fine and smooth satin, shouted back. Velostro sat on his chair quietly, the quarrel started because of him, "Guthix's sake! We are here to discuss for the lives of your citizens! And Empress of Hoffley, prince of Monasvenil and you king of Veldarsha I would like to say that the Chosen one is a white mage! And she is in Vulture village, curing every sick there!"Velostro shouted as he stood up from his chair, "King of Gorazere, I would like to thank you for supporting me, I am Guthix's prophet, no one should question my credibility when it comes to Guthix". The Empress sat on her golden chair as she felt embarrassment, "I will go and protect the lady"the prince requested, the leaders sat down as Velostro said "In time, the girl will learn her powers and will become a powerful sorcerer and a white magician, prince Feron please do protect her". "So are you saying that these particular girl was once a slave?"the handsome, young prince of Monasvenil curiously asked, Velostro nodded. "That's incredibly impossible!"the Empress exclaimed, "NOONE in this realm except us rulers, has the power to break the slavery bracelet!". "I told you, she is the Chosen One"Velostro explained. ========In a foggy part of Runescape======= Zamorack sat on his large, reddish, ugly throne, a fire appeared in front of him, it was his general, General Homadz. Homadz was a twenty five years old, with deep red eyes, his body was masculine, his hair was green, he wielded an armor made of runite that was trimmed in red. "What is it that you seek, I shall give"Homadz respectfully said as he bowed. "Have you find me a new realm?"Zamorack asked as he sipped blood from a golden cup, "Yes M'lord" "How old is it?"Zamorack asked gleefully, "Only twenty years..."Homadz replied as he grinned, "Any powerful threats there?", "Yes, M'lord"Homadz said as he continued "But the protector has no knowledge of her power", "A lady? A protector?"Zamorack laughed and he threw the cup of blood to the ground, "Destroy her"Zamorack said as anger came to his eyes, before Homadz could replied, a yound male voice shouted "Then you will be all destroyed", "Ichlarin!"Zamorack shouted in surprise. A tall, young, brown-haired man entered the room clumsily, this man wore a golden cloak and a golden staff on its right hand. "So you have been spying lately, haven't you?"Zamorack asked gleefully, "Yes, the lady is weak for now.."Ichlarin said in a low tone. "Then destroy her!"Zamorack hissed, "No! She will easily destroy us and learn about her magic!", "Then how can we kill her?", "Lure her to Runescape!"Homadz interrupted, Ichlarin and Zamorack smiled for such a brilliant idea.,,, Chapter four- Royalty and Dark Magic Kalisa lazily slept on her bed, not knowing there was a great devastation in the Vulture village. A young, handsome, nineteen year old man entered the room of Kalisa, this man wore an armour made of pure Runite which was trimmed in Guthix's color. Kalisa woke up in shock, "Who are you?!!?!"she hissed, "I am Prince Feron of Monasvenil, I am here because Velostro sent me here to be your protector"he replied, without any word Kalisa joined Feron's party. Kalisa saw a man badly wounded, it's legs were ripped off. "I must help him!"said Kalisa eagerly, "NO!"Feron warned as he grabbed her shoulder, "It is my duty here in Vulture to help the hurted ones!"she complained as she set free from Feron's hands. She immediately took out some runes from her pouch, she casted a healing spell, a white, small orb came out from the runes that floated at her hands, she released the orb to the injured part, it was now healed. "Z-Z-Zamorakians-s-s a-are a-attacking.."the man choked as he fainted. "What are Zamorakians?"she asked Feron who was looking at her, Feron fearfully pointed at three, heavy-armored men that was coming closer to Kalisa. She fell to the ground as one of them raised his sword, ready to struck Kalisa, Kalisa's pouched glowed, her runes were glowing inside. A violet-pink, thunder came down from the heavens and instantly coursed through the body of the man, a sizzling sound was hear, the man's organs were fried, the man collapsed to the ground, dead. Kalisa checked her runes, a few runes were reduced to her shock, "That's dark thunder magic!"Feron shouted in shock, "You really are the Chosen One...", The other two men started to charge Kalisa when Kalisa's pouch glowed, and another thunder from the heavens came down, that killed them. Kalisa fainted, Feron carried her and dashed towards the gate of the village, trying to escape the fury of the Zamorakians... Kalisa opened her eyes, it was morning, she took a glimpse of a clock, it was 9:30AM, she slept a day. She saw her bed was for a princess, it's bedsheet was red royal and was finely made from silk and satin. There was a door in front of her bed, it was large, made from the finest, hardest yew tree in the world. It swung open and Feron entered, Feron was wearing a princely suit. "So you are awake!"Feron sighed, Kalisa nodded. "Did I really casted thunderbolts?"she asked, her eyes glinting. "Oh yes you did!"Feron replied in a funny tone. After an hour explaining to Kalisa all about the Zamorakians, the world of Runescape, and the "Chosen One", the king entered. The king was wearing a huge, gorgeous crown filled with diamonds, Feron knelt down to his knees and kissed his father's hand as a sign of respect, "So yer the Chosen One?"the king asked eagerly. Kalisa nodded, "So do ye know yer quest?"the king asked politely, "I don't know Your Highness", the king sighed. "You must go to the Guthix temple which is-"the king explained as Feron interrupted "To the east". "Then you must get your ring at the temple"the king continued to explain. "Well in my whole life, I never had a ring"she said stupidly, "Don't be a silly, these ring will be given by the prophets to you"Feron laughed. "The ring will give you a strong, powerful shield that will protect you and give you immortality", "Why don't you just give the ring to anyone else and make her powerful"Kalisa said as she refused to accept the quest, "The ring will destroy those who try to wear it that isn't worthy"Feron interrupted again, "Okay I'll do it, as long as I have Feron beside me"she replied. Chapter Five- Prophets are now Petrified A long-green haired man wearing black, trimmed-red robes, entered the temple, he held a pale red orb on his left hand. The prophets looked at him, including Velostro. "You are the Prophet of Guthix's Music"he said as he pointed at an old lady wearing pink robes. "And you're the Prophet of Guthix's wisdom?"he said as the prophet wearing white robes shivered, "And you're the prophet of Guthix's healing?"he said again, pointing at Velostro. "What is it that you seek stranger?"Velostro asked politely, the stranger grinned maliciously, "I am here to destroy all of you! Including the Protector!"the stranger shouted as he raised both of his hands, together with the orb. The orb glowed red, evil red. It released large amount of red electricity that circled the whole place. The prophets shrieked as they turned into hard, solid statues. "Now I must wait for the coming of their saviour"he murmured as he grinned... ========In Monasvenil=========== Two beautiful, white horses were given to Feron and Kalisa. "This is what we will use in travelling"Kalisa said in delight, "Do we have enough food and water for four weeks?"Feron asked one of the servants, "Yes sir", "How many days would it take us to reach the temple?"Kalisa asked Feron, "A week and we will explore the realm of Runescape"he replied smoothly, Kalisa was half-happy, half-curious, she never went to other places or realms. A servant interrupted and gave Kalisa seven pouches filled with runes. They left and started their journey.... Whatever awaits them, we don't know(Except me!).

Welcome! It is my new story, I hope there would be more replies and more viewers. That's all, thank you :D ! Prologue: Hope is nearly destroyed A lady in white, gold trimmed robes laid on the floor in fear. A man in cloak, a staff with a skull on it's left hand started to approach her. She watched in fear and sadness, she looked at her protector. Her protector was also laying in the floor, dead. The man in cloak grinned maliciously, as he pointed the staff at her. She closed her eyes as she tried to accept her death, she looked into her past... =====Eighteen years ago====== Guthix himself created another world after the God wars, it was a called Guzimba. He ruled it for two years until he grew tired. "Master here are your travelling robes"a slave said as he respectfully gave a travelling robe to Guthix, Guthix smiled, "Blessed is your daughter, she shall be a queen of never ending beauty, she shall be the hope and ruler"Guthix said, the slave just not knowing that the prophecy was true. "Danny! Your wife is about to give birth!"Shinto, the friend of the slave shouted. Danny bowed respectfully and left to go to his house, Guthix smiled as he teleported to another realm called Runescape..... Chapter One- Released from slavery An empire rose after Guthix's departure, a rule was created, slaves will no longer have rights. Slaves were given a bracelet with a blue gem on it's top, it was called the Slavery bracelet, once you wear it, it will trap your strength and powers, you will instantly loose all your properties, it can never be removed from his or her hand. Kalisa, an eighteen year old girl who had long blonde hair, green eyes, and slim body watched the sunset. "Lazy slave!"her master shouted as her master throwed a rock on her back, "M'lady?"Kalisa asked as she rubbed her back in pain. "I order you to fetch me a bucket of water! NOW!"the master ordered, Kalisa's bracelet glowed, meaning that she must do a duty. She immediately did the order and slept at her ragged, dirty bed. She woke up due to her glowing bracelet, 'Another order!'she complained to herself, "M'lady I'm really tired, can i please sleep for a while?"she asked respectfully, her master slapped her. Tears flowed on her red cheeks, "Lazy!"shouted the master, "I have enough of it! All my life I worked here! You never respected me while I respected you!"Kalisa shouted in anger, her bracelet's gem glowed without an order, the master was surprised, the gem bursted into pieces, the bracelet was divided into five small pieces. "I-I a-am FREE!!!"Kalisa shouted in joy, she packed and left the house, she decided to find her new, free, exciting life. Chapter Two- White magician Kalisa carried her baggage as she entered White Tree village, a village just west of her old village. She accidentally bumped into a man who wore white, gold-trimmed robes. The stranger looked at him curiously, "S-Sir?"she asked nervously, "Would you like to be a White Magician? I will give you a free scholarship"the stranger asked, Kalisa secretly grinned, "I want to be!"she said happily. She was brought into a well-designed building or should I say "Academy". "My name is Velostro, I'm the head master of this academy"the stranger said, "My name is Kalisa, ummm... Sir what's a white magician"Kalisa replied as she scratched her head, Velostro chuckled, "It's a healer, but instead of using herbs and medicines we use magic"he replied while laughing loudly, "How do you use magic?"she asked curiously, "We use this runes"Velostro replied as he showed a rune with pink-violet star, a rune with a blue balancer, a rune with a droplet of blood. After only two months, Kalisa was able to graduate and became a full-fledged white magician. She was sent to a place filled with plagues, this place was called Vulture Village. On the day she reached the village, she saw people suffering in poison, sickness, and many diseases. A man, who was vomiting, approached her. "Ma'am, your a white magician...Please heal me from poison..."the man said as he choked, she took out some runes and cured him, the man gave her forty golden pieces. 'This is enough for me to sleep at an inn'she said to herself, as she was about to leave, a group of about fifty consisting women, children, men came to her asking her to cure them for free, she sympathized them and took out some runes from her pouch which hanged on her waist and casted a spell "Cure group".

I am making a new story, please do NOT open this anymore

Chapter two- Almost late and fighting a friend Shogen dashed towards the door which leads to the training grounds, all the trainees looked at him angrily. "Sorry"he said, the trainer put Shogen's name at the list. "Okay, I know you are all good in swordfighting, I will choose who will fight"the trainer said looking at the list. "Hi, my name is Klossal"a man said to Shogen, this man was about twenty-two years old, he had long brown hair, green eyes, tanned skin, he wore a shirt that was plain, his pants were rugged. "My name's Shogen, nice to meet you"Shogen replied. "Mr. Shogen"the trainer said and he stood up, "Mr. Volkenz"the trainer said as an ugly, weird, looking man stood up, "Both of you will fight using this swords"the trainer said as she pointed at two long, light bamboo swords. Shogen and his foe took the sword. "START!"the trainer shouted, and the enemy attacked first, he swung his sword left so powerfully that Shogen was almost beaten. Shogen and his enemy clashed their swords, but in the end Shogen slashed the man's knee, which made a temporary injury that will last for only thirty minutes. Everybody clapped their hands as Volkenz fell to the ground. "Next fight will be Mr. Klossal versus Mr. Stolniz"the trainer announced, Klossal and his enemy stood at once. They both took the bamboo sword and began, Klossal easily knocked down Stolniz with just four strikes. "Now the fight will be Shogen versus Klossal"the trainer said, Shogen was nervous in these fight, he knew that Klossal was challenging. Klossal attacked accurately, while Shogen blocked it easily. The fight was long and exciting, Shogen and Klossal clashed their swords, Shogen took advantage and used the heel of the sword as the weapon, Klossal was knocked down. "Our winner is Shogen!"the trainer shouted, "Okay make a line, I'm going to give the payment". Shogen was first in line, second was Klossal. "Hey that was a good fight"Shogen said cheerfully, "Yeah, you are good"Klossal replied. "Hey look at that armor!"Shogen exclaimed as he pointed at an armor that was white and trimmed with gold. "That's full Initiate, how beautiful"Klossal said as he admire such beautiful armor. "I'll collect all my money and buy that, it's only-I mean its expensive, it costs ten-thousand!"Shogen said. "You came from a rich family?"Klossal said cleverly, Shogen nodded.

Chapter One- a Father's heirloom Shogen, a typical young teen of Falador of the 4th age, he had short blonde hair, his eyes were deep blue, he had fair skin. His father died last year, he was left alone. When his father was still alive they were rich, but today he sold all the furnitures and including his mansion to the king, he sold everything except for a sword, it was large and it had a four pointed star in it's hilt. He found this sword at a chest, a golden chest. He was moving to a small house that was just a little north from the castle, the house was filled with dust, cobwebs, crumpled papers, and even ashes. The house had no furnitures, 'I must find a job after this work'he thought as he swiped the dust on the window. After an hour the house was neat, and there were also furnitures. Shogen left the house and went directly towards the general store. "Can i apply?"Shogen asked the shopkeeper. "We don't have any vacant jobs"the shopkeeper said politely. Shogen sighed and went towards the bank, "Can i apply as a banker?"he asked hoping that he will be hired. "No, we can't give out jobs today!"the banker shouted angrily and threw a crumpled paper at Shogen. Shogen didn't react, he was embarrassed. He went out sadly at the bank, he walked at the streets of Falador like a crazy man. He grinned as he saw a flyer on the ground, written in the flyer was: "To those who are good in swordfighting, We would like to hire you as white knights, we only accept those who have no criminal records. Please go inside the palace and talk to the squire. Payment fee will be 1,500gp per day." Shogen was delighted, he was good in sword(Take note that Shogen's father was a good swordsman), and he had no criminal records, the fee was pretty good. He dashed towards his home and took his sword. He went nearer to the squire. "Sir, can I apply as white knight?"he asked gleefully, "Name and Surname?"the squire asked, "Shogen Bladeholder"he replied. "You may join! Please go inside the palace, then go right, then left, and you might find the training grounds"the squire said after checking and reading a bunch of papers. "Wait, I have to tell you that you must leave your house and stay here for two weeks for training, and you can't join the army completely if you don't have full Initiate armor"the squire instructed.

Prologue: The book of a Legend Sir Amik Varze had a hard day, the black knights have declared war. In any moment they might attack, he and his troops weren't ready. He carelessly walked towards the library, as he entered, a book was upon a desk. The book was color red and was trimmed with gold, it was titled "Falador's Hero". He opened it, the pages were old, and on the front page were two portrait of a young warrior. The first portrait was a warrior who wore no armour, his hair was blonde, deep blue eyes, fair skin, masculine, and he looked like seventeen years of age. The second portrait was also the warrior, but he wore full armor that was white and was trimmed with gold, he wore a trimmed skillcape of Prayer that perfectly matched his armor, on his left hip was a sheath made of hard, studded leather, on the right hand was a sword, it's hilt was in the symbol of Saradomin, it's blade was divine, it was the Godsword. Amik's eyes widen, he never believed that these sword ever existed, these sword can kill a god. He never saw the book also, it was amazing that it was old, and it was dated back "The middle of the 4th age". He turned the first page and was now reading the first chapter.... ~End of Prologue