Maze Posted April 16, 2009 Share Posted April 16, 2009 This song was written entirely by me. Story: This song is about the flaws of the human race (violence,rape etc.), and how the world would be a better place if nobody used violence or mistreated people. Lyrics: We are like a burning flame Sometimes we're bright But other times we're just insane If this society wasn't so cold We'd see the day that peace would finally unfold If we weren't cruel and unfair We'd hear the resistance in the air Oh As I walk through the memories Care is nowhere in sight Why must you sin and blacken the light? Love her and treat her good Don't absorb the dark Here you go again, leave a mark We are like a burning flame Sometimes we're bright But other times we're just insane If this society wasn't so cold We'd see the day that peace would finally unfold If we weren't cruel and unfair We'd hear the resistance in the air Oh He was bright Until he brought a fight Leave your regrets behind and strengthen your good Pity his blood Recite the words of your fallen soul We are like a burning flame Sometimes we're bright But other times we're just insane If this society wasn't so cold We'd see the day that peace would finally unfold If we weren't cruel and unfair We'd hear the resistance in the air Oh Seperate the past from us Seperate me from the world Seperate dawn from dusk Seperate me from the world Seperate her from him Seperate humanity We are like a burning flame Sometimes we're bright But other times we're just insane If this society wasn't so cold We'd see the day that peace would finally unfold If we weren't cruel and unfair We'd hear the resistance in the air Oh We are like a burning flame Sometimes we're bright But other times we're just insane If this society wasn't so cold We'd see the day that peace would finally unfold If we weren't cruel and unfair We'd hear the resistance in the air Oh --- Some of you might be confused on some parts of the song, so I'll explain: The Chorus is the "We are like a burning flame..." "Sometimes we're bright" is supposed to mean that we have made breakthroughs. "Other times we're just insane" means we use violence and agression. The rest is self-explainatory. Verse 1 tells a story of an abused girlfriend. Verse 2 tells a story of a man who is treated like dirt in school, he fights his bully. The bully kills him with a knife. Verse 3 is a man who wishes to be seperated from the violent world and wants to be put in a place of peace. --- No, I am not depressed or anything. Don't get the wrong impression. I have written songs for months and just came up with this one. Rate it on a scale of 1-10. 1 being worst, 10 being best. :thumbsup: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Dark Lord Posted April 17, 2009 Share Posted April 17, 2009 I liked it. :thumbup: 9/10 SWAG Mayn U wanna be like me but U can't be me cuz U ain't got ma swagga on. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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