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Rate My Song: Bring On The Spark


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This song was written entirely by me.

 

 

 

Story:

 

This song is about the flaws of the human race (violence,rape etc.), and how the world would be a better place if nobody used violence or mistreated people.

 

 

 

Lyrics:

 

We are like a burning flame

 

Sometimes we're bright

 

But other times we're just insane

 

 

 

If this society wasn't so cold

 

We'd see the day that peace would finally unfold

 

 

 

If we weren't cruel and unfair

 

We'd hear the resistance in the air

 

Oh

 

 

 

 

 

As I walk through the memories

 

Care is nowhere in sight

 

Why must you sin and blacken the light?

 

Love her and treat her good

 

Don't absorb the dark

 

Here you go again, leave a mark

 

 

 

We are like a burning flame

 

Sometimes we're bright

 

But other times we're just insane

 

 

 

If this society wasn't so cold

 

We'd see the day that peace would finally unfold

 

 

 

If we weren't cruel and unfair

 

We'd hear the resistance in the air

 

Oh

 

 

 

He was bright

 

Until he brought a fight

 

Leave your regrets behind and strengthen your good

 

Pity his blood

 

Recite the words of your fallen soul

 

 

 

We are like a burning flame

 

Sometimes we're bright

 

But other times we're just insane

 

 

 

If this society wasn't so cold

 

We'd see the day that peace would finally unfold

 

 

 

If we weren't cruel and unfair

 

We'd hear the resistance in the air

 

Oh

 

 

 

Seperate the past from us

 

Seperate me from the world

 

Seperate dawn from dusk

 

Seperate me from the world

 

Seperate her from him

 

Seperate humanity

 

 

 

We are like a burning flame

 

Sometimes we're bright

 

But other times we're just insane

 

 

 

If this society wasn't so cold

 

We'd see the day that peace would finally unfold

 

 

 

If we weren't cruel and unfair

 

We'd hear the resistance in the air

 

Oh

 

 

 

We are like a burning flame

 

Sometimes we're bright

 

But other times we're just insane

 

 

 

If this society wasn't so cold

 

We'd see the day that peace would finally unfold

 

 

 

If we weren't cruel and unfair

 

We'd hear the resistance in the air

 

Oh

 

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Some of you might be confused on some parts of the song, so I'll explain:

 

 

 

The Chorus is the "We are like a burning flame..."

 

 

 

"Sometimes we're bright" is supposed to mean that we have made breakthroughs.

 

"Other times we're just insane" means we use violence and agression. The rest is self-explainatory.

 

 

 

Verse 1 tells a story of an abused girlfriend.

 

 

 

Verse 2 tells a story of a man who is treated like dirt in school, he fights his bully. The bully kills him with a knife.

 

 

 

Verse 3 is a man who wishes to be seperated from the violent world and wants to be put in a place of peace.

 

 

 

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No, I am not depressed or anything. Don't get the wrong impression.

 

 

 

I have written songs for months and just came up with this one.

 

 

 

Rate it on a scale of 1-10. 1 being worst, 10 being best. :thumbsup:

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