need some C/C

[maxiemumu]

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

A Sig I did a while back, but never got much good criticism. I would like some more. remember kids, USE SOME PERSPECTIVE. ;) Last time (2 or 3 months ago) no body understood the word perspective XD

[Zonorhc]

I like the idea, since it's not the usual cookie-cutter "OMG I R PWN LUKE AT MAI DRAG STOOFZ ADN BARROWZ!!!!11!".

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

If you worked on shading a little bit and toned down all the bright colours, it'll turn out a lot better. Try giving his legs a little bend at the knees to make his falling action more convincing. At this viewing range, you don't have to worry so much about anatomical proportions, but it still helps to work on them.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Work on the water a little more, add some whitecaps and such further out to sea.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Keep it up.