Oh You Pretty Things

[Humus]

Title inspired by Au Revoir Simone - Oh! You Pretty Things (Bowie Cover) [here]

[Pirate_Felix]

Pretty pro, think i like the second the most

im not really in a position to give illustrator c/c because those sigs arent based on lighting/flow

 

GALLERY IS ALIVE

[Humus]

Pretty pro, think i like the second the most

im not really in a position to give illustrator c/c because those sigs arent based on lighting/flow

 

GALLERY IS ALIVE

OOhh, thankies!

LONGLIVETEHGALLEREE

[Shiny]

Good stuff. Just a few pointers on these pieces... First of all, I like the last the most. I think the lack of colour help give the piece more depth: the colour is distracting in my opinion. I think this would tag would work much better as a large piece, simply because there is far too much going on in the small canvas. The focal needs to be defined, my eyes are having trouble deciding what to look at. The text seems a good option, maybe make that stand out more. I really do like what you have done to the text. I feel as if some of the other effects have been slapped around, with little regard concerning position and placement.

 

Define the focal, give the tag some effects and really simplify some of the effects.