May 13, 201016 yr What's three sizes too big,And fits like a glove,What buries the hatchet,And murders the dove,Through it labours are lost,And favours are gained,Anger is cheerful,Happiness pained,What catches the masses,And tosses all but two,What starts with a glance,And ends at a pew? ---------- (Constructive) Criticism appreciated! 10:53 PM - retech9691: I feel the need10:53 PM - retech9691: To include many chasms in my story arc10:53 PM - Resistance: You mean plotholes? Remember, Remember, the 4th of NovemberRIP Dawngate ;-;
May 13, 201016 yr Umm, my guess would be love. And totally random, but I love the Looking for Group avatar you have. U gotta love the "Fork of Truth"
May 13, 201016 yr Yeah, I figured love from the first line too. (Reminded of me a heart, from the grinch stole christmas, because his heart grew 3 sizes and all.) And then the "ends at a pew". I assume that means a church?
May 14, 201016 yr Author Eheh, I made this in maybe 15 minutes or less. As I thought about love and rhymes all those silly references came tumbling out, which ended up fitting it perfectly. I like this better than most of the quick little rhymes I come up with, so I decided to put it here. It kinda cheers me up. @ PereGrin - Indeed. Looking for Group is awesome, or, as Retech9691 would put it, pwnzorsauceified. @Kirby - Quite an astute observation. You deserve a medal! :thumbsup: ( <--- Smiley medal is smiley) 10:53 PM - retech9691: I feel the need10:53 PM - retech9691: To include many chasms in my story arc10:53 PM - Resistance: You mean plotholes? Remember, Remember, the 4th of NovemberRIP Dawngate ;-;
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