PereGrin Posted June 6, 2010 Share Posted June 6, 2010 The word "less" is used incorrectly a few times. Normal magic - God Spells: Keep in mind you need less casts of this spell per round then the other two options though. Black Salamander: as well as needing less shots than casts since the Salamander does more damage than most Normal Magicks spells Salamander and Ancients: Players who are using the Salamander exclusively should not take the runes and bring less potions since they will not be lasting as long. In these instances, the word "less" should be replaced with the word "fewer". "Fewer" should be used in all instances where the thing that is being talked about can be numbered. "Casts", "shots", and "potions" are all finite and countable, thus the word "fewer" should be used. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zaaps1 Posted June 6, 2010 Share Posted June 6, 2010 Changes have been made. I've credited you for pointing out those grammar mistakes. They should be live soon. Thanks! If you spot any other mistakes, please post. I'll leave this open for a little until the updates are live. ~It's Super Effective! (The Zaaps Blog)~My YouTube Channel, where you get to watch me go around and make a fool out of myself and all comp capersGuides:~Yeah I wrote them once~Suggestions:~Yeah I made those once~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zaaps1 Posted June 6, 2010 Share Posted June 6, 2010 Changes now live. ~It's Super Effective! (The Zaaps Blog)~My YouTube Channel, where you get to watch me go around and make a fool out of myself and all comp capersGuides:~Yeah I wrote them once~Suggestions:~Yeah I made those once~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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