July 6, 201016 yr So, I wrote this at 2 AM last night on some random inspiration. Feedback? Does it make you feel warm and fuzzy inside, or did you die a little inside? Without You 9.30 PM Im, watching the sunsetNext to you and, on my shoulder your head restsWords whispered that are never forgottenTimes shared that have never been spoken Bam, wake up, someone shoutsMy eyes open and I shut you outI really need to stop day dreaming at school timeBut youre always on my mind You know without you Im going insaneI think of you and I feel a painIn my mind you and I just arent the sameMy heart aches and I want the real thing But the real thing is so far awayAnd Ill hold on for just another dayIll wait for you to kill my painBut then It settles in againIll have to wait Now its 6 PM we have a date tonightIll take your hand and walk you through the moon lightIll hold you close and whisper in your ear What you mean to me, Ill hold you and always keep you near 1 AM now its time to goWere in my car, were driving homeStars paint the sky and light up your eyesI dont know if Im ready to say goodbyeFor now You know without you Im going insaneI think of you and I feel a painIn my mind you and I just arent the sameMy heart aches and I want the real thing But the real thing is so far awayAnd Ill hold on for just another dayIll wait for you to kill my painBut then It settles in againIll have to wait
July 7, 201016 yr This would be a good country song, that's exactly how I read it. Command the Murderous Chalices! Drink ye harpooners! drink and swear, ye men that man the deathful whaleboat's bow- Death to Moby Dick!BLOOD FOR THE BLOOD GOD! SKULLS FOR THE SKULL THRONE!
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