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nice, i dont know how the beat would go but how i put it it sounded right

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u got a talent very nice but it would be nice with a beat

 

\m/ (*_*) \m/

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I don't have much experience writing raps, but here it goes:

 

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Imagine life in the cold

Every day face the unknown

Survival is a question, with no answer foretold

And your entire life is like a black hole

Not even the faintest of hope, can make it through

Without having it crushed, and turned and made askew

Constantly shown what life should be

Constantly thrown into an action movie

Bombs dropping from the skies like droplets of rains

Missiles coming, now, without any kind of refrain

So you lay crouched under your bed, and try to be brave

Because if you hide your pain, maybe you'll be safe

Or at least save someone you care about, because terror is a weapon

And when used correctly, it usually is quite effective

So keep live by your dreams and hopes and keep near poems and quotes

Words can act like a guide in the park

But be careful, some might guide you, then throw you in the dark

Imagine...

 

Now, Imagine a perfect world

 

Every hope can be shared

With not a single life impaired

The questions answered

With no answers spared

Not even the blankest of looks, or a dream too far

Nothing's impossible, or even hard

You can pick and choose every aspect of life

But pick carefully, because you won't always pick right

Even if the crowd goes for it, take a moment

Is the crowd smart, or do they even know it

Cause the crowd doesn't own it

You do, and you can show it

Scream it now, it's my choice to make

And my risk to take

And, you'll sometimes find, it's your heart to brake

Here's where you need to be careful, so listen closely

Your imagining this perfect world, it's not real, not even mostly

It hurts to know, but at the same time it's a good thing to recall

Because a perfect world, isn't perfect at all

 

Imagine...

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feedback?

 

I think you and Das should do a collab. Quite enjoyable. :3

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