Skull Posted January 27, 2011 Share Posted January 27, 2011 My final poem for creative writing and the thing that might singlehandedly make me pass the class. I hope you guys enjoy it, I might throw up some other works if you guys would like. :grin: -------------------------------------- She sits upon her throne of iceGilded by sun’s rising raysMy eyes, if left to their own device,Would feast upon her beauty for days But oh! - How pangs of unfettered desireResonate unto my battered coreI understand now how she could inspireSuch artfully crafted lore Eyes like emeralds glint and gleamTell tale opposite her frownMind wonders what’s beneath the seamOf her snowy, silken gown A sound so soft escapes her lipsAs wind darts through the treesTightly grasped composure slowly slipsInto Lust’s unforgiving seas My momentary weakness is all she needsTo gather a glimpse of what’s insideShe separates me from man’s worthier breedsAnd casts me back into the tide Disaster! My heart is ripped asunderA bloody mess of a wreckAnd with an eruption of thunderI fail to keep my distress in check She sits upon her throne of iceGilded by sun’s setting raysMy eyes, if left to their own deviceWould weep uncontrollably for days [bleep] the law, they can eat my dick that's word to Pimp Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kingbleed Posted January 27, 2011 Share Posted January 27, 2011 I like it very much. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skull Posted January 27, 2011 Author Share Posted January 27, 2011 I like it very much.Why thank you :) [bleep] the law, they can eat my dick that's word to Pimp Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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