gizmolebb Posted December 25, 2005 Share Posted December 25, 2005 hey, this ius my first pixel sig so please tell me what i can improve and give me a rating out of 10 please Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Despaxes Posted December 25, 2005 Share Posted December 25, 2005 you need a light source, you dont have a consistent one... buildings are not white.... ever! even if they looks whie, they have other things to them why do your starts change colors? they need to saty somewhat consistent, and have relatively even spacing lava (i believe thats what your going for) isnt red, and doesnt flow like a stream, it more or less sits there doing nothing but bubbling your guy has a receeding hair line :shock: and his abs look funny Horizons arent flat :wink: and hands arent little balls GOOD STUFF: overall good for a first you shaded YAY!, although someof it lokos pillowshaded your anatmoy is ok for a first, but a little off im glad you atleat attmepted the face, practice m,akes you much better you have a border :D MERRYCHRISTMAS thanks everyone for the sigs! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MD666 Posted December 25, 2005 Share Posted December 25, 2005 you need a light source, you dont have a consistent one... Do you think pixels actually need a light source in the frame though? I mean surely if you were to just keep it in a consistant direction it wouldn't matter if you could see it or not? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Despaxes Posted December 25, 2005 Share Posted December 25, 2005 i know you dont need to see it, i was saying, he isnt shading with a single source....its shaded from different angles thanks everyone for the sigs! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MD666 Posted December 25, 2005 Share Posted December 25, 2005 Okay, I wasnt having a go btw I was just making convo... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Despaxes Posted December 25, 2005 Share Posted December 25, 2005 did i sound offended? sorry if i did, its just hard to set a tone across the internet, i try to use smiles, but they are sometimes misunderstood :oops: thanks everyone for the sigs! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MD666 Posted December 25, 2005 Share Posted December 25, 2005 And now you feel ill? Oh wait are you embarassed? Too hot? EDIT: re-reading it you dont seem offended at all. I think im just a bit drunk. goodnight. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toad Posted December 25, 2005 Share Posted December 25, 2005 did i sound offended? sorry if i did, its just hard to set a tone across the internet, i try to use smiles, but they are sometimes misunderstood :oops: 1000 posts grats, never a straight line for ground dagger in his hand poorly shaded and i dont like where its going.. and his legs are over the border?? ahrdly neat and tidy, but you've grasped shading which is always good for a first and basic linework so you have the foundations right practice practice ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
D_u_e_s Posted December 26, 2005 Share Posted December 26, 2005 not too bad man :lol: really thing that needs a hug is the little stream. Mybe a little more detial? However, not aweful again, keep it up! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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