hey, this ius my first pixel sig so please tell me what i can improve

 

 

 

and give me a rating out of 10 please

 

 

 

you need a light source, you dont have a consistent one...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

buildings are not white.... ever! even if they looks whie, they have other things to them

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

why do your starts change colors? they need to saty somewhat consistent, and have relatively even spacing

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

lava (i believe thats what your going for) isnt red, and doesnt flow like a stream, it more or less sits there doing nothing but bubbling

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

your guy has a receeding hair line :shock: and his abs look funny

 

 

 

Horizons arent flat :wink:

 

 

 

and hands arent little balls

 

 

 

GOOD STUFF:

 

 

 

overall good for a first

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

you shaded YAY!, although someof it lokos pillowshaded

 

 

 

your anatmoy is ok for a first, but a little off

 

 

 

im glad you atleat attmepted the face, practice m,akes you much better

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

you have a border :D

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

MERRYCHRISTMAS

you need a light source, you dont have a consistent one...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Do you think pixels actually need a light source in the frame though? I mean surely if you were to just keep it in a consistant direction it wouldn't matter if you could see it or not?

i know you dont need to see it, i was saying, he isnt shading with a single source....its shaded from different angles

Okay, I wasnt having a go btw I was just making convo...

did i sound offended? sorry if i did, its just hard to set a tone across the internet, i try to use smiles, but they are sometimes misunderstood :oops:

And now you feel ill? Oh wait are you embarassed? Too hot?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

EDIT: re-reading it you dont seem offended at all. I think im just a bit drunk. goodnight.

did i sound offended? sorry if i did, its just hard to set a tone across the internet, i try to use smiles, but they are sometimes misunderstood :oops:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

1000 posts grats, never a straight line for ground dagger in his hand poorly shaded and i dont like where its going.. and his legs are over the border?? ahrdly neat and tidy, but you've grasped shading which is always good for a first and basic linework so you have the foundations right practice practice ;)

not too bad man :lol: really thing that needs a hug is the little stream. Mybe a little more detial? However, not aweful again, keep it up!