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This is my entry for a competition on the media board. The guy is on holiday atm, so I decided I'd foloow the other artists and post my WIP. All C&C welcome. A few things in particular I'd like to ask advice on are the Ahrims robes, and the wall that is shaded. Do the robes look good, and does the wall look ok?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Edit:: The D and W in the corner are just my scales for the wall and door, the'll be removed once the wall and door are done.

the dark edges on his right arm (left in the picture :roll: ) look weird maybe make them like the other robe pieces and the wall looks fine

I think I have fixed the strange shading on the arm (update in first post). The shading was very abrupt on that sleeve. but I have evened it out a bit and I think it looks better. Is that what you mean frostbite?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Also, anything you noticed?

OH i know why he looks like a psycho 8)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

i think if you make his left eye (right in the picture :roll: ) a bit smaller and remove the evil laugh hell look much happier 8)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

btw the shading looks awesome now

Hmm, I'm not sure about making the eye smaller. I'm going for a psychotic look, I mean, wouldn;t you be happy if you had just got full ahrims? He's meant to look agressive, so I'll leave the eye, unles it is popular opinion it should be changed.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I'll get working on the rest of the wall, and post an update when I've done a bit more.