muhelos Posted January 2, 2006 Share Posted January 2, 2006 Hey everyone, I'm looking for some c/c for all my work so far. I want to know EVERYTHING wrong with them, this is so that i can improve alot. So be as picky as you can :P . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lemonfish Posted January 2, 2006 Share Posted January 2, 2006 The walls on number one and three have no texture and look perfect. The grounds the same. Make sure the shading looks proffessional. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toad Posted January 2, 2006 Share Posted January 2, 2006 the arrows in the first sig couldnt keep him in the wall, theres only one, the crack in the wall looks badd the whole sig lacks detail.. the second is just a copy and pasted bloodveld or atleast the head is.. same with the skull above his head the persons head looks flat the walls are good but shading is obvious... the third well lacks background looks like he's doing the river dance.. his eyes are weird and his head looks flat once more his left arm (to are right) looks strange as he has a orange blob on there the axe is good but the wooden bit is a let down the obsid shield doesnt look too good the money and the cavalier look weird also.. the fourth the handle iss wayy to long and the axe handle couldnt support all that weight the skeleton and the big rune blob thing looks weird the man to left of sigs his eyes look too weird and his chest is just one colour and its bg is a tiny bit dark.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
muhelos Posted January 2, 2006 Author Share Posted January 2, 2006 the arrows in the first sig couldnt keep him in the wall, theres only one, the crack in the wall looks badd the whole sig lacks detail.. the second is just a copy and pasted bloodveld or atleast the head is.. same with the skull above his head the persons head looks flat the walls are good but shading is obvious... the third well lacks background looks like he's doing the river dance.. his eyes are weird and his head looks flat once more his left arm (to are right) looks strange as he has a orange blob on there the axe is good but the wooden bit is a let down the obsid shield doesnt look too good the money and the cavalier look weird also.. the fourth the handle iss wayy to long and the axe handle couldnt support all that weight the skeleton and the big rune blob thing looks weird the man to left of sigs his eyes look too weird and his chest is just one colour and its bg is a tiny bit dark.. Here's not meant to be stuck to the wall. How should i make the cracks look good? I zoomed into a bloodveld and copied the colours. I didn't rip it from the game. How should i do the shading? The sig obviously isn't complete, He's meant to be lying down. How should his eye's and head be? How should the handle be? How should the rest be? How should his eye's be? How long should the axe handle be? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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