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nice, but there are a few things you've missed.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

the lighting:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

either the stones on the right or the left are wrongly lit, now it looks like there's a light in the middle of the pic, which doesn't look good IMO, the way throught the wall also makes it look like this. also the shield wouldn't reflect light that way.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

also, it looks like you've just made one half of the bricks and then copied it to the other side IMO.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

the linework:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

i don't quite get the stairs, looks more like a path of stones, to make it look like stairs you would have to use a different perspective or change the stairs so they don't go straight into the pic. also you could add some more detail, like for example a kind of "border" around the path, i can't get the right word atm...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

but it looks good nonetheless

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nice, but there are a few things you've missed.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

the lighting:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

either the stones on the right or the left are wrongly lit, now it looks like there's a light in the middle of the pic, which doesn't look good IMO, the way throught the wall also makes it look like this. also the shield wouldn't reflect light that way.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

also, it looks like you've just made one half of the bricks and then copied it to the other side IMO.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

the linework:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

i don't quite get the stairs, looks more like a path of stones, to make it look like stairs you would have to use a different perspective or change the stairs so they don't go straight into the pic. also you could add some more detail, like for example a kind of "border" around the path, i can't get the right word atm...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

but it looks good nonetheless

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

No brick was copied all done 1 by 1, wel shaded I copyed the bricks to put it down. The light it ment to come from the tunnel which would cause the bricks in front of the arch to be very light. It would also make the wall light.

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