February 12, 200620 yr The Myth of Greykiss. It was 1579. Greykiss is a boy like no other, his father was selling fish in Relekka like ussual and his mother was preparing the meal that they have been chewing on the past months, Greykiss was a adventures little lad, father knew that he would be a hero, a mighty hero that could slay dragons like no other.. 1621, Greykiss is its humble-home in Edgeville, he and his friends have been talking about a big bad three-Headed beast that has been making the wilderness pretty unpleasent, many friends of Greykiss went to the beast and came back whit blood on their faces and deep wounds on their chests, Greykisses parents were stunned from the happenings their and banned Greykiss from the wilderness, until then.. 1632, Edgeville has been terrorised by thousands of monsters, many people died of the power of the monsters, hundreds of people were lying in a big cradle of burning wood and houses, a few people survived, which included our hero Greykiss, his parents none-the-less didn't survived, Greykiss was completely shatteted of the loss of his friends and family, and swore revenge. 1634, after 2 years of training on less-stronger beasts Greykiss has become a hero, a mighty hero, that WILL slay a dragon like nobody ever did, and that day has reached its time. 1634, Greykiss arrives whit armour, weapons and courage and seeks monsters that destroyed and plundered his life, no life has been seen here yet, until he comes to the almost north of RuneScape, a huge cradle whit a ladder inside, arround it is a sturdy iron gate which would let intruders away, Greykiss seeks a way inside because he knew something this deffended would be his enemy, goal and revenge, he founds a lever, before he can say 'What the?!' he falls down a sandy hole, falling whit great power on the ground.. When Greykiss wakes up he sees hundreds, and hundreds of bones and corpses, just over them are 6 eyes, that makes the most gruesome noise Greykiss ever hearn since he heard his family and friends screamed for help aften te got killed by this.. this thing, Greykiss seeks his weapon, which was some meters infront of him, the 6 eyed beast steps out the darkness.. 1634, Greykiss see's a huge beast, a three-Headed black dragon that spits fire everytime it breaths out, Greykisses anger was much more hotter then the flames, He standed up, and ran to the dragon, whit great might, whit more power then all the gods of RuneScape together he unleashis a power, so strong and so rare, that the dragon even died before the sword reaches his neck, Greykisses goal was archieved, and his courage was a great inspiration for everybody arround RuneScape, Greykisses Myth was declared as pure power and pride, courage.. Greykiss (1572 - 1637). - ShadowSytze. I also sended this to RuneScape's story gallery. :)
February 15, 200620 yr Interisting... Fairly good, its more readable than most of the stuff thats posted here, but theres no challenge to the story. You need to add a sense of danger. I hope you'll revise this because I like the way you put it in a timeline form. Perhaps you could make it greykiss's diary Pm me if you need anything proof-read, I may not be very good, but I am always willing to help.A Seal Clubber is me!A Oxygenarin is me!6*9=42
February 18, 200620 yr Author Greykiss seems kind of old to be fighting... So where the Mytholgy gods of RuneScape.
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