KCHughes Posted April 15, 2006 Author Share Posted April 15, 2006 Here's 8 and 9! the russians are the best! Hands down! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
archimage_a Posted April 17, 2006 Share Posted April 17, 2006 Good bit of character thought, about them forgetting thier diffrences. Thats one of the things that even in the best selling novels dont do either. I liked it all And it was good in all parts, nothing really stood out http://www.uzzisoft..../archimage.jpegWell I knew you wouldn't agree. I know how you hate facing facts. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
threex4 Posted April 17, 2006 Share Posted April 17, 2006 wait to go man cant wait for next chapter Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KCHughes Posted April 21, 2006 Author Share Posted April 21, 2006 Sorry for the delay, but here's chapter 10! Probably one more chapter to go! the russians are the best! Hands down! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
x_Mindless_x Posted April 21, 2006 Share Posted April 21, 2006 Ugh! The suspense is killing me! What happens to the Regans???????? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
archimage_a Posted April 22, 2006 Share Posted April 22, 2006 Its a very you story, I liked all the little bits of speach and the suspence of the fact they didn't know it was red that betrayed them. http://www.uzzisoft..../archimage.jpegWell I knew you wouldn't agree. I know how you hate facing facts. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KCHughes Posted April 24, 2006 Author Share Posted April 24, 2006 Well, there's the final chapter, and if you can tell, I don't write swordfights very well... :( I'd like to make this sort of my "author's commentary" for the story. If you haven't guessed, I loosely based my story off of "A Fistful of Dollars," my favorite movie of all time. The only parts from the movie I used in my story are the White Knight/Ardougne Militia ambush and the divided city of Falador, and Red's character as well. The rest is actually based on a series of events that happened to me, in one of my bad experiences with a clan. I wanted to write this in the style of a western-type story, so I had to make a lot of adjustments to fit the Runescape theme. I intentionally made Red's character seem to teter between doing good and doing evil. I wanted to create the effect that he's actually very neutral and just acts out of his own self-interest. I'm pleased with the way it turned out, and I hope you are too! the russians are the best! Hands down! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
archimage_a Posted May 2, 2006 Share Posted May 2, 2006 Great ending...at least the sword fighting wasn't 'and red slashed at him and his head fell off' although you could have made it longer it nice to see a finished story. http://www.uzzisoft..../archimage.jpegWell I knew you wouldn't agree. I know how you hate facing facts. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
X_Independent_Gamer_X Posted May 2, 2006 Share Posted May 2, 2006 you ppl r weird, rather b writing a story than playing rs ahhhh its an apocalypse!!!!! were all going to die!!!!!!!!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KCHughes Posted May 3, 2006 Author Share Posted May 3, 2006 you ppl r weird, rather b writing a story than playing rs ahhhh its an apocalypse!!!!! were all going to die!!!!!!!!!!!!! Did you like it? the russians are the best! Hands down! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
archimage_a Posted May 3, 2006 Share Posted May 3, 2006 I think its obvoius that he did...no idea why but it seems like he did. Maybe because he had a post count of 2 so therefore is less likely to have read some of this forum before...that and its pretty random. And if I like a story I'l post, if I like the idea I'l post. I won't post 'I did not like the story' And so assuming that everyoner is simaler I'd guess he did. http://www.uzzisoft..../archimage.jpegWell I knew you wouldn't agree. I know how you hate facing facts. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DegenerateX Posted May 22, 2006 Share Posted May 22, 2006 Great story dude. How old are you? This kind of reminded me of a story I had read in school once about a guy working for bandits/smuggler and then turning on them, can't remember the title. Looking for someone to teach me how to Armadyl farm - pm me10,200th Person to Achieve 99 Magic on 1/10/08 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KCHughes Posted May 23, 2006 Author Share Posted May 23, 2006 Great story dude. How old are you? This kind of reminded me of a story I had read in school once about a guy working for bandits/smuggler and then turning on them, can't remember the title. I'm 17. the russians are the best! Hands down! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xewleer Posted July 12, 2007 Share Posted July 12, 2007 very good story, nice plot, good character, time to review it bwa ha ha ha ha ha ha ha!!!!!cough1cough!! I'll show you how terrifying a true Christian can be!It's Xewleer: ZEW le ar, got it memorized?Hermit of the Varrock Library and its proud guard. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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