Here's 8 and 9!

Good bit of character thought, about them forgetting thier diffrences. Thats one of the things that even in the best selling novels dont do either.

 

 

 

 

 

I liked it all And it was good in all parts, nothing really stood out

wait to go man cant wait for next chapter

Sorry for the delay, but here's chapter 10! Probably one more chapter to go!

Ugh! The suspense is killing me! What happens to the Regans????????

Its a very you story, I liked all the little bits of speach and the suspence of the fact they didn't know it was red that betrayed them.

Well, there's the final chapter, and if you can tell, I don't write swordfights very well... :(

 

 

 

I'd like to make this sort of my "author's commentary" for the story. If you haven't guessed, I loosely based my story off of "A Fistful of Dollars," my favorite movie of all time. The only parts from the movie I used in my story are the White Knight/Ardougne Militia ambush and the divided city of Falador, and Red's character as well. The rest is actually based on a series of events that happened to me, in one of my bad experiences with a clan.

 

 

 

I wanted to write this in the style of a western-type story, so I had to make a lot of adjustments to fit the Runescape theme. I intentionally made Red's character seem to teter between doing good and doing evil. I wanted to create the effect that he's actually very neutral and just acts out of his own self-interest. I'm pleased with the way it turned out, and I hope you are too!

Great ending...at least the sword fighting wasn't 'and red slashed at him and his head fell off' although you could have made it longer it nice to see a finished story.

you ppl r weird, rather b writing a story than playing rs

 

 

 

ahhhh its an apocalypse!!!!! were all going to die!!!!!!!!!!!!!

you ppl r weird, rather b writing a story than playing rs

 

 

 

ahhhh its an apocalypse!!!!! were all going to die!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

 

 

Did you like it?

I think its obvoius that he did...no idea why but it seems like he did. Maybe because he had a post count of 2 so therefore is less likely to have read some of this forum before...that and its pretty random.

 

 

 

And if I like a story I'l post, if I like the idea I'l post. I won't post 'I did not like the story'

 

And so assuming that everyoner is simaler I'd guess he did.

Great story dude. How old are you?

 

 

 

This kind of reminded me of a story I had read in school once about a guy working for bandits/smuggler and then turning on them, can't remember the title.

Great story dude. How old are you?

 

 

 

This kind of reminded me of a story I had read in school once about a guy working for bandits/smuggler and then turning on them, can't remember the title.

 

 

 

I'm 17.

very good story, nice plot, good character, time to review it

 

 

 

bwa ha ha ha ha ha ha ha!!!!!cough1cough!!