Well, yesterday i was here reading some of the amazing stories people have put forward, and i thought i would give it a shot since as it looked fun and they were enjoyable to read.

 

Anyway My story isnt very long yet but its not even finished chapter one, i would LOVE and help criticism all that sort of thing to try and make my "story" better.

 

Thank's,

 

Scex

 

 

 

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The Tales of Birospal

 

 

 

 

 

Chapter 1: The Forgotten Book

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The moon shone high above the barren wasteland, providing the only light for the vacant place not known to many, a small hut and a mysterious arena lay close to the only views around, dying trees, dead grass, lava and mouldy blood a blank space completed the dreary atmosphere and a smashed signpost was the only means of identification but the words had been scrubbed off nothing but W lde n ss and a giant Skull was left. The rain poured down on the dusk ground and small rivers of blood and damp skin trickled down them into the fiery lava streams. Thunder briefly flashed and it was then that they appeared under the dull atmosphere, dark robes, forbidding weaponry, immense magical ability and fearless faces they stood tall beside each other and were prepared for anything and everything that came their way.

 

 

 

Wind roared past and lightning struck revealing a dazzling logo buried onto the capes of the fearless adventurers, it read ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¦Ã¢â¬ÅTeam ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¹ÃâXÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢ ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬ÃâÃ

nice story, although i cant really give you any advice as im just starting to write