k i posted my 1st 2 yesterday and heres the 3ed i still havent got the scimmy dun perfect yet but im working on it tell me what you think of it and dont make fun of me its my 3ed try at this sorda stuff...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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final changes lol

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

you should put a pic axe in his hand it looks like hes in a mine

ok....its not bad but here is wat i see wrong......the scimmy needs work...the helmet is to circly and the little thing comin off that helmet is too small....also the shading looks wierd in some places like the shield.

Ok I fixed it up a little bit hows that i tryed to work on the scimmy but i cant get it right ill try and do better on the nexed one i do...

The background is a bit empty. You have the kite which all nice and strait, and then the sword is all weird,no real form. The arms are weirdly bent. Everything else is pretty good

ok i think i finaly got the scimmy working for me its better then befor anyway any1 got any other suggestions for me? maybe something to put in the back round right now hes in like an under ground cave the thing nexed to him is one of those stalagmites any idears for me all suggestions are welcome.

ok i think i finaly got the scimmy working for me its better then befor anyway any1 got any other suggestions for me? maybe something to put in the back round right now hes in like an under ground cave the thing nexed to him is one of those stalagmites any idears for me all suggestions are welcome.

 

 

 

better, add more of those rock formations hanging down, and maybe also dra w bat or something.

there iv added some stuff iv fixed the shading in the back round and added some brightness where the tourch is i think it looks pretty good now :-)

good goood. Make the kite little more skinier, seems to wide. and then i think its good

there kites smaller ;-)

any last suggestions comments anything no wow thats awsome i need some support here i work on that all day lmao!