me_poulin Posted August 10, 2004 Share Posted August 10, 2004 k i posted my 1st 2 yesterday and heres the 3ed i still havent got the scimmy dun perfect yet but im working on it tell me what you think of it and dont make fun of me its my 3ed try at this sorda stuff... changes more changes more changes final changes lol Once in a life time! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cell_snake Posted August 10, 2004 Share Posted August 10, 2004 you should put a pic axe in his hand it looks like hes in a mine Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dark_ice Posted August 10, 2004 Share Posted August 10, 2004 ok....its not bad but here is wat i see wrong......the scimmy needs work...the helmet is to circly and the little thing comin off that helmet is too small....also the shading looks wierd in some places like the shield. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
me_poulin Posted August 10, 2004 Author Share Posted August 10, 2004 Ok I fixed it up a little bit hows that i tryed to work on the scimmy but i cant get it right ill try and do better on the nexed one i do... Once in a life time! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vladmoney Posted August 10, 2004 Share Posted August 10, 2004 The background is a bit empty. You have the kite which all nice and strait, and then the sword is all weird,no real form. The arms are weirdly bent. Everything else is pretty good Visit my DeviantArt Page at http://vladmoney.deviantart.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
me_poulin Posted August 10, 2004 Author Share Posted August 10, 2004 ok i think i finaly got the scimmy working for me its better then befor anyway any1 got any other suggestions for me? maybe something to put in the back round right now hes in like an under ground cave the thing nexed to him is one of those stalagmites any idears for me all suggestions are welcome. Once in a life time! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vladmoney Posted August 10, 2004 Share Posted August 10, 2004 ok i think i finaly got the scimmy working for me its better then befor anyway any1 got any other suggestions for me? maybe something to put in the back round right now hes in like an under ground cave the thing nexed to him is one of those stalagmites any idears for me all suggestions are welcome. better, add more of those rock formations hanging down, and maybe also dra w bat or something. Visit my DeviantArt Page at http://vladmoney.deviantart.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
me_poulin Posted August 10, 2004 Author Share Posted August 10, 2004 there iv added some stuff iv fixed the shading in the back round and added some brightness where the tourch is i think it looks pretty good now :-) Once in a life time! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vladmoney Posted August 10, 2004 Share Posted August 10, 2004 good goood. Make the kite little more skinier, seems to wide. and then i think its good Visit my DeviantArt Page at http://vladmoney.deviantart.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
me_poulin Posted August 10, 2004 Author Share Posted August 10, 2004 there kites smaller ;-) Once in a life time! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
me_poulin Posted August 10, 2004 Author Share Posted August 10, 2004 any last suggestions comments anything no wow thats awsome i need some support here i work on that all day lmao! Once in a life time! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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