My second falsh

First off, The Gallery forum is there for a reason. Second, stop trying to promote your site. Third, Rune isn't the same colour as Adamantite. Fourth, your flash is FRIGGING CRAP! You really think people are gonna appreciate incredibly amateur drawings that look like they've been done by a 5 year old on crack?

 

 

 

If you want constructive critisism, here it is. Next time (oh dear god), try to make your drawings JUST A LITTLE bit better. Slow down the text speed so it's easier to read, and spell "chance" correctly. If you're gonna upload something to show hundreds of people, at least spell check your work...<_< And lastly, what the hell are up with your guy's shoes? I mean, come on? Really? "I realy worked for it"? By worked, do you mean spent 5 minutes cobbling together a piece of barely litterate crap? For God's sake man...Really. Just. Really...

Wow, that was a bit... harsh

However, after seeing it I suppose I must agree, it really wasn't good at all. Perhaps you should get in some practice so you don't post flash movies that don't show any effort or skill at all.