My first pixel!

[Zeldaboy125]

Please rate. i have been hard at work on this one, so constructive criticism is accepted as well as rating out of 10.

 

 

 

Here it is:

 

 

 

[mixand]

pretty good, but heres some advice, when you do the drawing take out the extra wobbly bits.. erm how can i explain

 

and also use more colours with shading, and dither it

 

oh and helmets dont usaly look like their flat

 

hope i helped :)

[cadburys_egg]

It's ok, but lacks slight bits of anatomy and an original font. (That font, Papyrus, is overused at the moment and looks tacky.)

 

I assume you did this in paint aswell? By the look of the circles.

 

 

 

• Right shoulder (his left) overlaps his chest. Wrong.
   
  His head is an oval, lacking ears and a defined chin.
   
  Same for the armour, you've just used the circle tool for his shoulder and elbow joints.
   
  Short arms. Stand up yourself and see where your arms hang to, it's beyond your waist - not level.
   
  His feet look like little bags. This could be just because they are facing square on.
   
  Shading is pretty good, but could do with some dithering.

 

 

 

I think that's all. :)

 

It's better than other "omfg mai furst picksel" people.

 

 

 

Oh, and well remembered to save it as a PNG. ;)

[Thestep1]

u have too shade it a bit more try the paint brushes i tried them on my own sig (im not really a sig maker or somethin but its only a tip) it goes a lot faster then doing it pixel by pixel

[xxsheepxx]

Hm.. you relied too heavily on the preset circles. Doesn't look 3-d either. Probably a brazilian times better than any pixel work i could do, though.