Abyssal Whip...lol

[Skolden]

I hope this is the right place to post this, I was just looking at old files when I found this in the documents folder... It is just an old story I made when I was younger about the Abyssal whip. Dont mind the spelling errors and other grammar problems as I haven't messed with it at all since then....Anyways here it is.

 

 

 

 

 

Devloped in the early ninteenth century as a way to battle the ever growing need for Varrocks defenses this whip was created. Due to the lack of knowing about the Abyss a Zammorock scholar named "Verac" explored the deep Abyss. When Lord Zammorock heard about the sinister plot he thought about monopolizing the Abyss's natural resources which happened to be weapons and aromor from all the clueless adventures who didn't realize they were immiedately skulled. Despite Lord Saradomins best interest he and his brother Zammorock and Guthix traveled into the Abyss only to find a brave warrior named Skolden. After much argument Lord Guthix cast "fire blast" on Skolden only to have the blast returned to him. This immediately stunned Guthix and his brothers cried out in fear. Skolden then said, "I have harnessed the power of the Abyss for myself!". After grinning evily at the three brothers Skolden held his hands high in the air and a shinny box appeared out of nowhere. Skolden the pulled out a strange whip and called it "the Abyssall whip". After the three brothers argued for a few pointless minutes Skolden grew tired of the bickering and lashed each of the once. Each brother was instantly scared with a symbol that was made partly from their emotions. After this Skolden told them they would watch over Humans forever and turned them all into gods. With their new god powers they killed a few of the Abyssal creatures simply looking at them. Skolden then angered lashed at each again but with no effect. Skolden then realized the foolish part of his plan. With each of their new powers they were now stronger then Skolden himself. They each grinned in their own way and called upon their powers. Skolden felt a slight dizziness as he was slowly abosrbed by the whip! Skolden closed his eyes and gritted his teeth and then started to scream. when he opened his eyes he looked and only saw darkness. Skolden know realized what had happened. He was now one with the Abyssal Whip!

[ignafel]

kool story =) but can i ask why u puted the name Skolden to the protagonist?

 

o and btw this belongs to this forum? :P

 

edit: nvm lol i saw ur name now =P

[SanFranciscoGiants]

Heh pretty good read