http://img48.exs.cx/img48/1823/samplesig10.gif

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Rate it! any thoughts on how I might make it better?

Doody dood dood BUMP.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I see views but I see no posts. How am I supposed to learn if people don't give me areas to work on?

It looks nice but perhaps a bit more shading? Don't forget cast shading as well. When the fence comes down, it's view angle is a bit off. At that part, the space between the fence pickets shouldn't be able to be seen since it comes toward the viewer.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Good first try though, keep up the good work. :)

It looks nice but perhaps a bit more shading? Don't forget cast shading as well. When the fence comes down, it's view angle is a bit off. At that part, the space between the fence pickets shouldn't be able to be seen since it comes toward the viewer.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Good first try though, keep up the good work. :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

OMG I didn't notice that about the fence!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Thanks for noticing that. I am going to get right on fixing that.

Oh forgot to mention another important thing:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Add a border, you'll be surprised how much more pleasing to the eye it will be then. :)

OMG. I can't believe I overlooked that. I will now chastize myself.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

http://img11.exs.cx/img11/2341/sigpixel13.gif

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I completely redid the fence perspective and changed some shading. how is it now?

much better but needs some more stuff to fill spaces unless you want it more cleanish. i like your style and detail. once you work on some more maybe your should make a couple of sigs for peeps

much better but needs some more stuff to fill spaces unless you want it more cleanish. i like your style and detail. once you work on some more maybe your should make a couple of sigs for peeps

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

A big problem that I have is filling spaces on my projects. Once I get a theme going, it is almost impossible to figure out something in that theme to fill the space.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

But thanks for the advice anyway!

Lol I think its pretty good, good job UT.