Dormado Posted October 6, 2006 Share Posted October 6, 2006 I hope i didn't make any mistakes.. i am not very good at english oi tried to check trought the Microsoft Word.... The mysterious deep The scrolls of Beyond Introduction (how everything has started): I was surprised, because almost none of the books held in this library were about science. So I contacted few friends, prepared the gear, and traveled to east. To the Far East to make some new discovery. But what we found was much better. I will begin this book by the list of supplies which we bring along with us. Me: 20 lobsters (I carried the food for the journey) 1 rope (everything might happen̢̢̮ââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâæ.) 350 death runes (for Water blast spell) 1050 water runes (for Water blast spell) A ghost speak amulet (we knew that we will have to go to port Phasmatys) I kept some space for more items. I held air staff and worn wizard T full My companion no. 1: 20 swordfish (he is a powerful warrior, so he carried his own food) Amulet of Ghost speak Nothing more He wield a rune full set, and rune scimitar. My companion no. 2 10 swordfish (I can̢̢̮ââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t believe they made me bring that much food when they had their own!) 500 Adamant arrows. Maple short bow Studded leather body Studded leather chaps Vambraces Amulet of Ghost speak Coif And he left some free space for other items. He wield an Adamant full set, and rune scimitar. We were prepared for our journey: We knew about bank in port Phasmatys, so didn̢̢̮ââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t bother to bring all our equipment. Chapter 1 Travel We started our travel in Varrock; we traveled to North-East until we saw the Lumber Yard, then we turned to East. We traveled to East, and next morning we crossed the river Salve. Traveling east we visited the small town of Canifis. While we banked our items into more needed ones my companion no. 1, had a conversation with a citizen. Which told him to stay out of Canifis or he will eat him. Well I may say you that my friend̢̢̮ââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢s scimitar and the citizen̢̢̮ââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢s head had a little conversation with citizen̢̢̮ââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢s head. Then the citizen turned into a Werewolf! Of course my friend won, but that was a surprise̢̢̮ââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâæ We left Canifis same day̢̢̮ââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâæ.But when it came dark we sew horrible and unspeakable things in the Haunted woods. If not my companions I would be sure dead. We fought the vampires, helped each other fighting horrible beasts. When the morning came we were all tired and even think of getting back, but then we first time saw the walls of Port Phasmatys. Chapter 2 The preparations and bad luck We put our Amulets of Ghost Speak on and approached the ghostly guards. We made a sacrifice to Ectofuntus (we had our grind bones and ectoplasm buckets in banks so we took them from Canifis). We gave our Tokens to Guards and they let us in. We took all our equipment and prepared for tomorrow. We found a quiet house in which we slept trough the night. In the morning we went to the docks for some information about the ships sailing from the Port Phasmatys. Dear Saradomin! The ghost sailor said that the bigger ship is broken. (Actually the mini Ectofuntus was broken down). And when we asked for the price of the trip to Dragon Tooth Island... He said 50 Tokens!!! But then my companion saved whole expedition: he said that he has got 269 Tokens in bank. So we sailed to the Island of dragon tooth. It was not anything that we expected for a price like that. It was a plain island with no trees and only the statue of Saradomin stood there. Of course there was such a peaceful place̢̢̮ââ¬Å¡Ã¬ÃâæBut it wasn̢̢̮ââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t worth that bunch of Tokens̢̢̮ââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâæ While my companions examined the island I looked carefully at the water. It looked so dark and cold. I touched it ̢̢̮ââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Ãâ it was cold, very cold. I decided to do some experiment, I asked for my companion no. 1 to give me 3 coils of rope and something heavy ̢̢̮ââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Ãâ he gave me an iron dagger. I tied the ropes and the dagger together and threw into the water. About 1 meter from the coast. Then I began to let the rope down. It went all the way (about 10-12 meters), then I ran out of rope. I pulled the dagger from the water along with the ropes and began thinking. The bottom of the ocean must by very low. But 10 ̢̢̮ââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Ãâ 12 meters near the coast?! Something was not right, I knew a guy who could help me to find it out. My own suggestions were that the stream made a giant hole, or that this island was man (or magic) made. Maybe the magical barrier from the waves ̢̢̮ââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Ãâ but all of this was just a suggestion. We went back to the port Phasmatys and the bank. I took few special things from bank ̢̢̮ââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Ãâ first one was my ̢̢̮ââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¦Ã¢â¬ÅGreen Spark̢̢̮ââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâà The clock is ticking, and your time is running out, mortals. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
archimage_a Posted October 6, 2006 Share Posted October 6, 2006 Good, although there were a fair few spelling mistakes. Nothing too major though. Bit rushed, I thought. Not a whole lot of detail. The ending wasn't done particually well but it set up for a sequel. Liked the story and the realism. He said 50 Tokens!!! Improvement-You could not use slots, rather say I had space for a few more items. Or something similar. :thumbsup: http://www.uzzisoft..../archimage.jpegWell I knew you wouldn't agree. I know how you hate facing facts. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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