Justin742 Posted October 7, 2006 Share Posted October 7, 2006 Debtor of the Ghosts Part I: Debtor I thanked the priest and walked out of the chapel. The sun was rising as I made my way to the Holy Barrier of the River Salve. I walked into the starry void that was the barrier and clutched the curious looking dagger the priest had given me. It took a minute for my eyes to adjust to the gloomy fog of Morytania; as my vision cleared I saw a misty swampland covered in vines, mud and puddles of water. At my first step off the bridge and onto the path leading into the town called Canifis I felt the muddy ground squish as my boots sank into the marsh. I felt very alone on my quest to find Calek, an old friend of my fatherÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢s, nobody was around. I continued into Canifis and was relived to see humans walking itsÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢ streets. I walked up to a man who was leaning against a wooden post with a small flier on it that said ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¦Ã¢â¬ÅWanted! Braindead butler!ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâà With a quill or reading spectacles, visit the Varrok Library today.Become one of the first members of the Order of Honor!http://forum.tip.it/viewtopic.php?t=572462http://s8.invisionfree.com/The_Order_of_Honor/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
archimage_a Posted October 8, 2006 Share Posted October 8, 2006 Well it had a different ending to what i was expecting, although he might come back as a ghost...anyway I thought it was good, moved at about the right speed. Who is Exidious? http://www.uzzisoft..../archimage.jpegWell I knew you wouldn't agree. I know how you hate facing facts. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Justin742 Posted October 8, 2006 Author Share Posted October 8, 2006 Exidious is a character I created to write my stories. :) I tried to make the ending so I could expend in an interesting way once I have time to write the sequal. With a quill or reading spectacles, visit the Varrok Library today.Become one of the first members of the Order of Honor!http://forum.tip.it/viewtopic.php?t=572462http://s8.invisionfree.com/The_Order_of_Honor/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Buckeyemange Posted October 12, 2006 Share Posted October 12, 2006 Very good. The detail is great, and I love the fact that you have what everyone really thought when they found wolfbane. Keep up the good work! The GES, the only clan ruled by a Goat. "How did it start? I mean, did one kid just yell out lets have sex!"" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Justin742 Posted October 13, 2006 Author Share Posted October 13, 2006 Hurray! Somebody responded! I will continue to write for this site whenever I have the time. Edit: Part two added. =) With a quill or reading spectacles, visit the Varrok Library today.Become one of the first members of the Order of Honor!http://forum.tip.it/viewtopic.php?t=572462http://s8.invisionfree.com/The_Order_of_Honor/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
archimage_a Posted October 13, 2006 Share Posted October 13, 2006 Good. Liked it http://www.uzzisoft..../archimage.jpegWell I knew you wouldn't agree. I know how you hate facing facts. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Justin742 Posted November 18, 2006 Author Share Posted November 18, 2006 Part Three has been added! (FINALLY =D) With a quill or reading spectacles, visit the Varrok Library today.Become one of the first members of the Order of Honor!http://forum.tip.it/viewtopic.php?t=572462http://s8.invisionfree.com/The_Order_of_Honor/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Justin742 Posted November 19, 2006 Author Share Posted November 19, 2006 I was not aware of that. :oops: vv With a quill or reading spectacles, visit the Varrok Library today.Become one of the first members of the Order of Honor!http://forum.tip.it/viewtopic.php?t=572462http://s8.invisionfree.com/The_Order_of_Honor/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
archimage_a Posted November 19, 2006 Share Posted November 19, 2006 I do but to post after every update is considered spam... http://www.uzzisoft..../archimage.jpegWell I knew you wouldn't agree. I know how you hate facing facts. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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