Everything posted by Justin742
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Spirits of Shadows (my book, chapters 1 and 2)
I see, yeah pretty good name Issy. As for the chapter name I normally come up with the story before I write it and then I write it and last I name my chapters having to do with what happened in each one or what the chapter is building up to. So I'll tell you if I come up with anything.
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Spirits of Shadows (my book, chapters 1 and 2)
Pretty good, looks like you did spend alot of time on it and I only saw a couple of errors with your grammar and I noticed the atmosphere changing after the first part. What is this thing with using Issy as a character in stories? Not trying to be rude to Issy, I've seen her in a few stories here so far and I'm just wondering why.
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The White Knight
Pretty funny. Reminds me of One Small Favour. Pretty well written also, good job Mario!
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Rate My Book, Hopefully...
I like it so far, pretty intruiging. (Hmm, did I spell that right?) Can't wait until I have time to finish reading it!
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~In-Game Clans~ *pics*
I support, looks like alot of fun and very convienent.
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Welcome to Runescape...
Welcome to RuneScape. I need to fill this with beer. (Empty beer glass) Welcome to RuneScape. Looks a bit tatty... (A door in Port Phasmatys) Welcome to RuneScape. I better be careful eating this. (Shark) Welcome to RuneScape. Ooooh spooky! (Right skull half) Welcome to RuneScape. The very butcher of a silk button. (Rapier)
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POLL: Highest Stat?
Range at 98 and counting.
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Noobs say the funniest things!
Noob: Buying Guthan's legs Me: How much? Noob: 1M Me: No thanks Noob: 2M Me: No thanks Noob: I'll only go up to 9M Me: 9M? Noob: Yes. Me: You have 9000000 gold pieces? Noob: 9000k? Me: Isn't that what you said for Guthan's chainskirt? Noob: Yes. Me: Ok, I'll get it, come to bank. (On our way to the bank) Noob: Is it really 9M? Is it a good deal for me? Me: If you think it is. Noob: How much are the legs worth? Me: I don't know. (Noob runs ahead. I walk up to the bank and he runs out) Noob: Noob scammer! It's not even 900k! Reported for item scamming! (Of course, the 'noob' didn't use anywhere near this level of grammar but you still get the idea of the story.) I bet he is a wannabe mod or something that thought he was laying a trap for me.
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disscussion: noone uses games room anymore
I also agree with this, partially because I extremely dislike football (boring and dumb :)) and I love soccer. And partially because I love chess. Now, I think people don't go there because most players are hyper children or teenagers that can't stand to sit still and use their heads in a grown-up game.
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The Story Of The Chaos Alatar:The Mage Who Made Chaos
Its a good story, just take some more time writing it so the grammar is correct.
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Dwarves & Dragons
Curious, veru curious. Although I liked it until the end, you probably could have made the parts a little longer.
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How Far Are U Going With Hunter?
I don't plan on ever stopping. I think its awsome and the people that don't like it just don't have that much patience. If so then Hunting is not for you.
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Light-Weight P2P Skilling Outfit
^ Plus don't forget your chef's hat. I like to wear Ghostly Robes, Random Event sets and I also put together stuff sometimes for a slightly original look (my latest is Vyrewatch boots, pants and shirt with RFD Black Gloves and a Highwayman Mask).
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Guide to Getting Your First Skull Sceptre
Looks pretty good but one thing is make sure you say Skull Sceptre in the title, or other people might think Pharaoh Sceptre.
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Help with finishing the TzTok-Jad
Thanks for your help guys. I think trying to do one healer per attack will help me alot.
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Debtor of the Ghosts (Added Part Three)
I was not aware of that. :oops: vv
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The low Agility epidemic...
I like agility and while I'm only 55 right now I'm working on it. It is for sure one of the best skills to get 99 at since you cant buy it. Like Fletching, Cooking, Woodcutting and Firemaking.
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The Mooncrest Chronicles (Chapter 7 Now Posted!!!)
Oooh the suspense! Good job the only thing I noticed was that you used the same phrase to describe a couple things but no big deal.
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Help with finishing the TzTok-Jad
Ok, I am doing the TzHaar fight Cave. I make it to the TzTok-Jad with no problem. What I have an issue with is keeping my prayer right when the healers come. Any ideas or suggestions?
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A Game Too Much (Completed)
Wow, thats pretty long. Also, most of it is great so good job.
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Debtor of the Ghosts (Added Part Three)
Part Three has been added! (FINALLY =D)
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~~~Vampire Tears~~~
Pretty good. I think its great how you captured the perspective of a reluctant vampire.
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Alchemist!
Good way to open the story, now create it.
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And I pull the strings...
Whoa...thats very good. Haven't seen a poem that good in a long while. Congratulations!
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The knight who went Berserk
I thought that is totally patheticly massively...AWSOME! Good job. (I believe you mean smirked not smerked and cur not Kur though ;))