Justin742

Yes, more detail.

Not bad, I find it interesting for sure. Just a couple small grammar issues but that is easily fixed.

That really stinks about losing your hat but I would stay on your original account. Believe me, it is more fun to continue working on your main than to make a pure, I know from experience. Don't throw 99 Runecrafting away (and whatever other good skills you have).

Good concept but the writing itself is a bit scratchy. Maybe give longer parts to the story and work a little on the grammar. Personally I would take out the smilies but if its what you wanted and its part of your style then it adds originality to it. I do like how you gave songs to listen to on the different parts of the story, to bad it would be difficult and/or annoying to choose the songs for each part. 7/10

Not a bad beggining to the story. Maybe for the combat part a little less statistic and a little more vivid detail. Like for instance, I wouldn't be as interested if I knew that the cut was 1 and 1/2 inches deep and it did 10HP of damage but if I knew the word picture instead it would be more interesting. I like the ending, keep writing it! =)

I'm not sure if this is in the correct forum but does anybody have any ideas about how to get my image file size smaller? It is currently saved as a .JPEG and since I made it in PS I merged all the layers. It is still 2.4 KB over the limit allowed for signatures on the site so I thought maybe you guys could help me. Edit. Sorry, I didn't look before starting the thread so I shouldn't need help.

Sounds like fun as long as we are cooking stuff besides fish. =) Thats what everybody cooks. I will see about coming, depends on timezone I think.

Well written and a awsome point. Thank you Oreo.

Good so far. Nice to see a unique angle on RuneScape. Continue the story.

Good story idea but personally I wouldn't have copied the Lord of the Rings.

I completely agree with your point mrpez. Well spoken like a true mature player of RuneScape.

Thats great that you came back from the big hack. Congratulations.

I like it so far. Moved into the battle a little faster than I expected but an interesting idea you have so far. Continue!

Hurray! Somebody responded! I will continue to write for this site whenever I have the time. Edit: Part two added. =)

I like it. Good moral.

Pretty good for first, unfinished try. To bad we couldn't get more information but I like it so far.

Not bad, I would have made it a little longer though.

Exidious is a character I created to write my stories. :) I tried to make the ending so I could expend in an interesting way once I have time to write the sequal.

This one is rushed yes, I just whipped it up. Tried to be a little funny with it also.

A story written by Exidious the Archivist. Three pkers and anÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬ÃâæEvil Chicken?!? Pk Masterown went through his bank. What to bring? Dragon hide? Rune plate? Splitbark? So many choices! He pulled out dragon hide chaps, splitbark body and a rune medium helm. He took for a weapon the most feared of them allÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâæthe mighty rubber chicken he had stolen one Easter but brought throwing knives with him just in case. Taking all the bear steak he had, he started for the wilderness. Umewildynow had a choice to make. The whip or the poisoned dragon dagger, he also had to choose between his armor that once belonged to Torag the Corrupted or his rockshell plate armor. He closed his eyes and grabbed randomly. He chose the armor of Torag and the whip. To go with what he chose, he brought an elemental shield in case some annoying wizard came along. Taking twenty sharks and three strength potions, he headed for the wilderness. Fightmenoob3 grasped his ancient staff. He put many runes in his pack so he could use many ancient attacks of any kind should a tough opponent come along. Putting his black mystic robes on, he took a large swig of magic potion. Feeling empowered and taking all the lobsters and swordfish he could muster, he headed for the wilderness. Our three player killers each took separate routes that headed for the Lava Maze. Along the way Pk Masterown had a great adventure escaping from dragons and poisonous spiders. Umewildynow too had a great adventure, as he killed two archers along the way. Fightmenoob3 brought down a knight and a wizard on his way to the Lava Maze. Fightmenoob3 looked up, towards the Lava Maze. A distant silhouette could be seen against the black ash cast down from the thunderous mountains of fire. It was a knight, an easy kill for a wizard of his power. As he shot ice at the knight which he came to recognize as Umewildynow, he felt sharp pain at his side. Seeing a small throwing knife laying on the ground and the blood at his left side he turned. A pathetic level 34 named Pk Masterown stood there with more of those poky pieces of metal. Fightmenoob3 switched to Ice Barrage and attacked both enemies at the same time. But Umewildynow resisted and charged at Fightmenoob3. As Pk Masterown ate fifteen of his bear steaks he charged at Umewildynow and Fightmenoob3 fired at Pk Masterown. A great battle ensued, Umewildynow and Fightmenoob3 ate all their food and used all the potions. They clashed strongly damaging each other and occasionally smacking the chicken wielding newbie aside. Just as the two strong warriors knocked each other down, Pk Masterown ran up to finish them with his knives but was knocked down again. All three of them lay there, to weak to continue fighting. They agreed they should be friends and save their equipment for another time. They struggled to their feet and readied for the return journey to Edgeville. As the three new friends walked south, a whoosh of smoke was heard from behind and an all to familiar voice shouted ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¦Ã¢â¬ÅFlee from me Umewildynow! Bwuuuhahaha!ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬ÃâÃ

Debtor of the Ghosts Part I: Debtor I thanked the priest and walked out of the chapel. The sun was rising as I made my way to the Holy Barrier of the River Salve. I walked into the starry void that was the barrier and clutched the curious looking dagger the priest had given me. It took a minute for my eyes to adjust to the gloomy fog of Morytania; as my vision cleared I saw a misty swampland covered in vines, mud and puddles of water. At my first step off the bridge and onto the path leading into the town called Canifis I felt the muddy ground squish as my boots sank into the marsh. I felt very alone on my quest to find Calek, an old friend of my fatherÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢s, nobody was around. I continued into Canifis and was relived to see humans walking itsÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢ streets. I walked up to a man who was leaning against a wooden post with a small flier on it that said ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¦Ã¢â¬ÅWanted! Braindead butler!ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬ÃâÃ

Um...here's a cookie... Sounds like you are leveling at a good pace, if you want my opinion, go for either high skills or high combat first, then do the other. That way you can have a way to make some money to support training of the other as you go...then again, you could do both at the same time, it would just go slower than if you did one at a time.

Dang, not much action here. Anyway, good luck getting the stats you want...took alot to get you back into RuneScape didn't it? :-w

I'm with Pest Control for experience...but because you have *cough* 1 defence, do rock crabs.

Ok, so nobody likes it. Thats why the title is My strategy. It works for me so I thought somebody might want to try it, heh guess not. I know some of you say "oh you would get wasted in seconds," well if this were true, I wouldn't have said this works well for me and I have only not captured the standard once or twice. I hope you guys can forgive my first guide here being lame.