Came up with some rhymes. Rate, hate, whatever.

[Mac_The_Rocker]

You can never be what I want you to be

 

 

 

I'll never live up to what you want to see

 

 

 

There's always someone better than me

 

 

 

Why can't you just let me be.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

In my restless dreams I walk alone

 

 

 

Thoughts of you cut to the bone

 

 

 

I don't know what I'm supposed to see.

 

 

 

Why can't you all just let me be.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I'm still trying to forget.

 

 

 

That first day we met.

 

 

 

You smiled at me and made me regret who I am.

 

 

 

Now I don't give damn.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

You went with him.

 

 

 

You left me dim.

 

 

 

Don't count on me.

 

 

 

Now I'm free.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

"Guitar Solo"

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Why can't I forget?

 

 

 

Why can't I let it go?

 

 

 

Since the first day we met.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

You made me think of love.

 

 

 

You made me look above.

 

 

 

You never talked.

 

 

 

In my dreams I walked.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I missed my chance.

 

 

 

It won't happen again.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Since the first day we met...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I'm moving on.

 

 

 

The battle inside me is won.

 

 

 

Forget this, I'm done

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

~Moving On by Mac

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Probably starts out fast, near rappish...then starts the chorus with heavy strumming, repeat some lines, solo, fade to outro.

[PURESMITHER]

Very good, I like it here because theres not many songs or poems here. You could do a little more, or maybe a few more songs plox? You obviously have a talent for song writing and it would be nice to see a few more here. :D

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

OFF TOPIC:

 

 

 

But in my opinion, the real life charts are crammed with all these 'breaking up/divorcing etc' songs. All I hear on the radio nowadays is something like:

 

 

 

'Why did ya leave me baby?'

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I'm getting a bit sick of it.

[Aznhuskarl]

^^like he was saying. There's too many boring songs with that theme. It's too easy to make up one right now with the same or similar rhyme. {I'm also a songwriter and I used to write those crappy poems as well.}

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Since you (Mac the Rocker) wrote that one, well it's not bad.

[Mac_The_Rocker]

No...it reflects my life in a way. It's messy, but I never broke up with anyone, and isn't implied in the song :