dont flame please. i admit its no where near anyone elses, but its nearly my second try, took and hour n a half.

 

 

 

 

 

 

it was a great idea having this one rite over the one by shaw lmao, lets add some space ;)

 

 

 

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Err are you familiar with the term vanishing point :shock: .

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Not bad for second try.. The linework on the guy needs work - Arms are wider than the body? Legs are good, fatten out the body, lessen the arms, fix the lava (should vanish in the distance), fix all the like weird scribbles on the ground, change them into stones or trees or something, difficult to tell is there is shading, make shading more obvious. Font is cool, but make it bigger.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Hope that helps :o .