December 6, 200619 yr EDIT; I just recently lost all interest in this story and deleted everything and am starting over, this time modernly with a touch of medievil stuff, look for it later Please rate the prologue to my book-in-the-making. this is a history of one of the charecters in the book and happens in the past, it relates to nothing until page, i believe, 56, where everythign unfolds. I have much more, 67 pages more, though I don't want to bore you to death. Please, any and all suggestions, flames, and rude remaks are appreciated. ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¦Ã¢â¬ÅEkrob, a mighty Yakku general, led a procession to the armory. The Yakki were marching to war. Yakki were an evil race; a mistake of mankind controlled by a malevolent king. For the past hundred years they had kept to themselves, though there were battles, there was never a war waged between them and any other beings. Their king himself possessed a power so strange and mysterious; he could bend the Yakki to his bidding. All knew he was not really of their race, but no one had the courage or stupidity to bring up the matter for fear of and unspeakable death. The voice of Ekrob was one that commanded respect, one that commanded fear. ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¦Ã¢â¬ÅAku gwenÃÆÃâÃâöb, miu siuki losk, Ready the battle lionsÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâà Last.fm Signature Overlays
December 15, 200619 yr I like it so far, pretty intruiging. (Hmm, did I spell that right?) Can't wait until I have time to finish reading it! With a quill or reading spectacles, visit the Varrok Library today.Become one of the first members of the Order of Honor!http://forum.tip.it/viewtopic.php?t=572462http://s8.invisionfree.com/The_Order_of_Honor/
December 26, 200619 yr Author Changed it, don't want you to die of boredom... Last.fm Signature Overlays
December 26, 200619 yr Well it looks good, not terribily helpful saying there are 64 odd pages, and it wont make sense till page 56. That and the fact many people get bored with half a page, I would suggest posting...the first 5 pages at least...Then see what people say... However I would be considered a supporter because...All authors are good authors...even if they mispell the title and every other word, or the story makes very little sense(Eg mine according to the vast majority, though I think they make sense most of the time). So just see how it goes.... http://www.uzzisoft..../archimage.jpegWell I knew you wouldn't agree. I know how you hate facing facts.
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