this is my third try at these kind of sigs, still not good but getting better i think, what do you think?

 

 

 

looks ok but the shark and arms are kinda off.

Arms kinda look unnatural like he is using steriods. But maybe you were going for that look.

his arms are big because thats what happens when you fish, i went on a fishing boat for 3 months and when i got back my arms were 7 inchs bigger so thats why i did to him.

bump

Ok firts dont take offense to this blue. :D

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

You got your angles messed up. That pole is giving a view like your above the it. But the guy is flat. If you do that you would need to see the guys head.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

also try drawing the fin like this / instead of _

he has expression on his face but his stance does show it hes just standing looking at the screen you should never make your character look away from were the action is like actors dont look at the camera they pretend its not there

nice sig.. keep it up :)

 

 

 

just, why r his eyes all black ?