January 12, 200719 yr Feet are horrible misshapen and misplaced. Too much definition on the knees, she looks anarexic because of that. Chin drops down way too far. She's too muscular according to her left arm and it bends un-naturally, unless you wanted it to look broken. You could lower the nose just a bit, actually, you could lower the entire face and not worry about the chin. She has either extremely long fingers or a very small hand, either way shortening those lines would make for an overall greater piece. I'm not sure what is with the black/white stockings... Linework credit goes to someone else who's name escapes me...
January 12, 200719 yr i see no boot o0 -feet are too small -chin too pointly -face to wide -fingers around wand are too long -centerise the nose -left forearm is bent/broken -bring left eye over abit -neaten up the lines -curve the top of her head -wand tips differ in length -find a feet tut, they are badly shaped -you can see eyes and eyebrows over the hair, last time i checked they went behind the hair =P PJB21 100% my own work, i make my own brushes: set 1 set 2
January 12, 200719 yr Author Thanks for the great C\C guys... named a ton of stuff to improove on I'll try and edit this picture soon as i get time... New sigzor^^
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