i drew this the other day and i need some c/c becuz no one has seen it yet, so plz give some criticism :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Scanned and shrunk no computer work done

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Abit of work on computer

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

i plan to totaly redo it all in paint and then colour t in and shade it, i want this to be awesome so any help is apreciated.

Uh get a better eraser :P and it looks like the shoulders are connecting to the pl8... makes it look funny

1. The helemt is not cemetrical.

 

 

 

2. His armour looks like cloth. Make it so it is not as form fitting.

 

 

 

3. Shade the shield. Right now it looks like it's bending inwards.

 

 

 

4. The ammulet doesn't look like it is hanging. The string is too bent.

 

 

 

5. The way he is holding the dagger, looks like he just stabbed himself.

 

 

 

6. His right arm is longer then his left.

 

 

 

7. The glove is more defined on his left hand.

 

 

 

8. His neck is lopsided.

 

 

 

9. On the cumputer edited one, The edges are all rough, ands there is a big white spot in the cape.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

^CC^

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Yeah, but even if it were dragon chain, it would fall straight down. It is not like it's made out of spandex.

oo i had better clear this up b4 ppl start to assume its a plate :P

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

hes wearing

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Med

 

 

 

dragon ammy

 

 

 

dragon chain (i made the shoulder pads connect thro the middle to make it look abit more unique)

 

 

 

zammy cape

 

 

 

Dragon legs(again decided to make it look unique)

 

 

 

dragon dagger(p)

 

 

 

dragon sqr

 

 

 

coking guants

 

 

 

desert boots

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

that covers it hope u can see it the way i do :)

1. The helemt is not cemetrical.

 

 

 

2. His armour looks like cloth. Make it so it is not as form fitting.

 

 

 

3. Shade the shield. Right now it looks like it's bending inwards.

 

 

 

4. The ammulet doesn't look like it is hanging. The string is too bent.

 

 

 

5. The way he is holding the dagger, looks like he just stabbed himself.

 

 

 

6. His right arm is longer then his left.

 

 

 

7. The glove is more defined on his left hand.

 

 

 

8. His neck is lopsided.

 

 

 

9. On the cumputer edited one, The edges are all rough, ands there is a big white spot in the cape.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

^CC^

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

1. i dunno how to make it cemetrical :oops:

 

 

 

2. chain is ment to be form fitting

 

 

 

3.shield is coming inwards its a drg square looking from the inside so it bends arund his arm.

 

 

 

4. ok thx

 

 

 

5.i know...:(

 

 

 

6.darn

 

 

 

7. um i spose

 

 

 

8. how can i fix this?

 

 

 

9 im cleaning edgs now and the spot is just my stuffing around with it... im still working heavily on this...

 

 

 

^^

 

 

 

K thanks heaps bro :)

'lo raist...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

1. helmet's weird, the 2 horns arent the same... iits also longer on the right side then the left, look carefully

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

2. the jewel on the drawn 1 is better then the computer editted one... and how did the string manage to bend in that angle? :?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

3. the shoulder pads looks like a cloth with attached horns drooped over the chain... chain also looks like a piece of netting and why is there a blur over the chest? :?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

4. cape looks like a block of wood... or double blocks of wood... thin it out and put some lines... or itll look like paper

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

5. frankly, the dagger looks as if its sliced slantedly.... the shield looks as if it had managed to bend itself inward somehow...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

6. horns on the kneecaps just looks totally weird... try using a small dragon design on the calf or thighs...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

7. boots dont match, especially the shading and the shapes...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

hope ive helped

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

:)

lol well u havnt really helped cuz i know u have no idea wat ur talkin about :lol: sorry i take c/c from experienced pixelers mainly 8)

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