Minion_V

I'm better with abstract, but I hate the way Runescape looks off of an abstract bg.

Third and Final Entry:

lol as i look upon ur page i come to a realization, quality is MUCH MORE IMPORTANT than quantity! I think his point was that you need to practice a bit more, just he was beating around the bushes rather than saying it straight forward.

It's too plain for my liking. Instead of a tech look, it's more like a 60's retro look. However, it is better than the average signature, so I'll give it a 6.5/10

2nd Entry:

Retro:

1. The helemt is not cemetrical. 2. His armour looks like cloth. Make it so it is not as form fitting. 3. Shade the shield. Right now it looks like it's bending inwards. 4. The ammulet doesn't look like it is hanging. The string is too bent. 5. The way he is holding the dagger, looks like he just stabbed himself. 6. His right arm is longer then his left. 7. The glove is more defined on his left hand. 8. His neck is lopsided. 9. On the cumputer edited one, The edges are all rough, ands there is a big white spot in the cape. ^CC^ Yeah, but even if it were dragon chain, it would fall straight down. It is not like it's made out of spandex.

Second Attempt ...

Here's my attempt. If you want anything changed, just say so. Minion V