or the simpler version:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Seeing them together, I think I like the second much better. The first has way too much going on.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

So what do you think? C/C appreciated.

font looks little weird

 

 

 

mabey set it to smooth?

 

 

 

looks like its at none right now.

 

 

 

the color could use a little work

 

 

 

do the ctrl - b thing, not ctrl - u.

 

 

 

it has potential

Thanks for the advice. :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Ok, I fixed the text, added some gaussian blur for a little glow, and made the color a little richer.

text's still kinda hard to see... try using a dark outline, like navy blue, and a white text inside for a better look :wink: